porfavor me duele como garcia esta sufriendo pero morgan no le puede decir la verdad me gustaria que garcia este un poquito en peligro aver si no reaciona morgan no lo tomes amal pero si garcia esta en peligro asi reacione morgan porfavor sigela pronto

I know you're not writing anymore, but I have to tell you this is amazing! I'm heartbroken that you weren't able to finish it. The tension between Pen & Derek is so strong, yet you convey their hurts & mistrust so well! I'll keep dreaming that you'll finish this:-)

Please Please Please Update!

Please update!

I take it that this is the last of this story. I see you don't plan on completing it. So sorry, it was good.

are you gonna keep writing this?

This is awesome! I just found this yesterday and could not put it down. Your English and grammar are better than most Americans I know. I do hope you pick this story up again. It would be a shame to let it go unfinished.

You should definately finish this story. I can't wait to read more to see if he is ever going to go back to Garcia or is Garcia going to find someone else and help him open his eyes.

Please update more, and keep up the good work.

This is a great story so far would love to see it continue!

so he calls her baby girl and they share a bed? :(
has he completely replaced his true baby girl?
i am going to stick with this story but it is breaking my heart

I HATE ISABELLA! no offense to your awesome story. no one fills in for baby girl ._.

Just found this story and I love it. I relize you haven't updated in awhile but I would really like to see more of this story. Please update soon :)

obviously they have been through so much together but she seemed to gladly become 'Babygirl' to Derek. I reread the last chapter and found it funny that she realised that they were sitting close to each other zoning all the others out but she broke it up by saying she was tired? Maybe Isabella doesnt want it to work out for Morgan and Pen? I know she is being a good friend, but getting him to call her babygirl is so not on and isnt acceptable on either behalf.

I like the story but am so not liking Isabella. Maybe another new team member will balance the status quo. ANother Morgan lookalike who likes Pen. Pen needs someone to choose her first.

There is only one babygirl in Dereks life and it ain't you sweetie. I am soooo glad that you are continuing this story and I sooooo can't wait till Derek tells Pen that he loves her.

I loved reading about how much he loves her and how his love for her only grows stronger, please update soon, I gotta have my M/G fix

glad to see this story back