Twas a good one, i like the way you write

Ugh so really thing was all bout that bitch ziva not about tony and gibbs ugh what a let down, wasted my time reading this shit

Oh of fucking corse ziva has to get shot too god forbid tony actually getting some attention over her grrr stupid bitch is always everyones main focus it seem so fucking annoying

Aww! Tony and Tim! :D

Dang it. You almost made my day...and then her heart started beating. *sigh* Can she be in a permanent coma? Anyway, looking forward to seeing what happens next.