Oh geez, it looks like this story has been forgotten, but whatever! I enjoyed what little there is, it's a cute little idea. Truthfully, it's nothing epic, but it's sweet and fluffy, a nice break from all the angst. There were some typos here and there, though it seemed to be pretty well edited, and while there were a few moments of OOC-ness, there was nothing huge. Overall, pretty good! If you ever came back to this idea I'd definitely like to see where you take it.

This story has some potential to it. It really is a "cute" idea, and it helps me forget of the horrible ending of Season 1 and the movie. I really disliked the endings.

Hopefully, you will continue it, and that it won't be forgotten by the Creator; you.

You updated! I love you man! I really liked this chapter a lot, kind of like taking a little bit of time to explain things a bit more. So, you got writer's block? Yeah, I hate that. I hope you won't give up on this story though. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

You know, by the end of FMA, Mei had grown up to be almost as tall as Al.

Alright then! I won't stop! XP

I get slightly confused when you use the same spelling for Alphonse and the CoS look-alike... (Sorry, don't know how to spell his name.) Could you fix that?

In the paragraph for Al to read, you put a space between 'feeling' and 's'. You also forgot to put in a capital 'W' in the first sentence of the last paragraph. Aaannd...that's it concerning grammar stuff.

Ed really shouldn't be talking. XD After all, it's not as if he's the tallest person. And besides, Mei's a girl. Girls are usually shorter than guys.

I loved it! Great job!

In a way, it's better like this... :) Great job!

Umm... On another note, even though you write on who has the pen, try using line breaks to separate the writers. That may just be me being nitpick-y on you. Also, the first time Winry takes the pen, you misspelled 'Hughes' and forgot to capitalize 'Mrs.'

Ok, enough picking on you! ;) Overall, you did great! Will be waiting for that update on Saturday!

Nice, this is a very interesting story!

A few grammar mistakes, but the story is moving along very well and it has a lot of heart. Good job so far!

Aww... How sweet! Although, should someone who has only seen Brotherhood be reading this?

But, I like it so far!

It only has one typo! "Hugs" is supposed to be "Hughes", right?

Good job!

Ooooh, I like... You should try and get more concrete detail in there and fewer musings, but it's a sweet story nonetheless.

Personally, I hated the ending to the original FMA, which is the main reasion of the many reasons why I like Brotherhood better. It's also the reason why I started reading FMA fanfiction. Hopefully, you can give it a better ending with this story. I always love reading people's thoughts on how it should have ended.