Reviews for Star Fox: Stranger Lands and Deeper Space
RainbowNoms chapter 17 . 2/22/2013
Don't fret about the length of your chapters, man. This is quality writing right here, and I for one prefer to read the words rather than count them.

I still vote to keep Kevin human, too, but I've seen the other reviews. I know I'm in the minority.

Before I go, one last thing: You're a fan of the Nin10Doh! series, aren't you?

Peace,
-Brandon
Zero Hawklight chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
My vote Anthro!
Comrade chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Haha! This chapter was extremely funny! :D

Meh, this chapter wants me to keep 'em human. It makes sense that way. If there was any part, it would have to have been earlier. Like the bugs thought he was sick, er something, and decided to 'heal' him by makin' him furry. Even then...there is the bone structure problem...though they did take out his organ and replace them... :D

I prefer that you do what you want to. If I come up with the ideas, I lose interest because I already know what's going to happen. (That's basically why I sucked butt as an author [besides sucking anyway] hehehe)

I will give you the repetitive sentence though; great job! This is an awesome chapter!

;P

Rightio, best of luck to you in school, give em heck. :D
Razorblade88 chapter 16 . 2/14/2013
I got an idea what if Kevin not only becomes an anthro (choose which kind yourself, but it has to have fur and a tail). He also gets his gender changed, It would make for a unique plot twist
3-D Jak chapter 14 . 2/8/2013
Turn Him Into An Anthro pleez *makes puppy-dog eyes*
Comrade chapter 16 . 2/7/2013
Wait a sec, I reviewed chapter 14...how could I have missed all of this? I think I confused this with a story I read a long time ago...really sorry man...massive epic fail on my part...

Anyway, as long as you upload chapters, no matter how big or small, I will read. :D

Lol, yeah, there's like, 2 other stories that had the main character named Kevin. What are the odds of that? haha! I remember looking at all the story descriptions way back when all three were started at the same time...it was so funny...

Regardless, great job on the chapters. :D
Comrade chapter 16 . 2/7/2013
Aww dang! Somehow I never saw the last 5-6 chapters when they came out! I'm really sorry that I didn't R&R earlier, it would've helped you no doubt.

Side effects of blue liquid anthropemorphic animal :D

It would be interesting to read what your anthro looks like...feel free to change him if you want...after all, what were the side effects caused by the liquid on the other subjects? D:

I have enjoyed these new chapters very much. You've done well, even through all the crap you've had to deal with. As for the anthro or human conflict, I would love to be able to read both of him as human, and him as anthro...maybe an idea would go have him become an anthro because of the wounds changing something because of the blood mixed between him and the beast...in any case he could be fixed up at Corneria back to human form...your choice...I don't care either way as long as you do something. :D

All in all, good luck on your homework, midterms, finals, whatever you get...haha. :)
tamed kyuubi chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
intros fans hatred
THIS intro fans intriging
Biollow chapter 14 . 12/13/2012
Must be a Kevin craze going on, but yeah, totes turn him into an anthro. And don't apologize for short chapters pfft, as long as you got it uploaded aye? ;D
Comrade chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
Make em an anthro! :D

Siberian Huskies are known for their strength...just do one that fits his character.

Good job so far. :D
Razorblade88 chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
I like the idea of Kevin becoming a two tailed anthro fox, due to the crystal he found,maybe it had a strange side effect
RainbowNoms chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
Honestly, my order of preference is this:

1. Keep Kevin human.
2. Make him anthro
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28716: Make Kevin a humanoid-alien-thingy.

I wish you the best with this story, though. Human-Lylatian stories are fun. :D
-Brandon
ArchWarrior213 chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
Don't turn him into a anthro that has been done too many times. It's cliche now. Really don't see how the anthro can become the ultimate as the alien. I hardly believe that the aliens know of the Cornerians and have some kind of serum that will transform him into an anthro.
Biollow chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
It was interesting to see how the writing style has developed from chapter one to thirteen and it's getting better :D keep going!
Binnel chapter 12 . 5/17/2012
Y U NO HAS COMPUTTR AT HOEM?

Lol. Anyways, aww...
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