Um...VALVe. Portal and it's characters belong to VALVe. Just uh...just thought I point that out.

Interesting, please update soon!

This looks really, truly, adorable. Please, please, please, write more. I know it's been like two months but could you get Chell and Wheatley together just for me? I promise, no mashy-spike-plates from me. This is a cute story, and the concept is really remarkable. A sort of core-recovery thing goin' on there. I like it. Wonder if they'll get Rick out, eh? Or the fact core. But please get Wheatley done first, god I loved him so much in the game, it broke my heart when 'E' didn't work on the moon. Update again soon, please! ~Kat

You defiantly need to update this! It's absolutely brilliant! :3

nice story wonder what chell will do

Very nice! I can't spot anything I'd critique in this chapter.

I'll admit, now you've got me looking forward to some Spaciosity on the sidelines.

I had the funniest mental image of a ghostly Wheatley standing awkwardly outside of Chell's shower at one point... *shakes head* I know, there was nothing in the chapter to suggest that it's anything but her imagination, but...

Wow! Great job! I loved it! Ps: portal belongs to VALVe, steam is what you play it on.

Must read more, must know what, is, happening! Pwease write more XD

I got a shout-out? Cool!

Not much to say this time, actually. Pretty good chapter, feels a little rushed, but not bad. I'm definitely looking forward to the next one.

Yay! you updated, I always wait until the second chapter to review since I've reviewed on chapter one and the story didn't get updated so I feel superstitous about reviewing early.

I love your story. It's one of the better ones about the cores coming from humans that I have read. Most people seem to forget about morality, curiosity, and anger when mentioning the cores.

I can't wait to find out what happened to Chell. I personally think she did find the cyrogenic chambers but ended up passing out and dreamr that GLaDOS was gonna make her into a core. I can't wait to be proven either right or wrong. Keep up the great writing.

Very nice! You had a few typos, but for the most part, it's good.

"liking this idea more and more bad the second, it had potential. 'Mr. Johnson would like theses, their very...science-y'" is my major critique. First, "bad" should be "by", the comma after "second" should be either a semicolon (this ; ) or a period, and that's the wrong there/their/they're. You want "they are" ("they're") but you're using "belonging to them" ("their")

Still, like I said, it's got great potential. Everyone's in character, and it's fairly well written. I'll keep an eye on this.