Great story, love it

Loved it. Oh, if only the show would go that way. We will see...

Amazing. Totally worth the wait! I would love to see a perfect scene like this happen in the new season. Hope you'll write more soon!

Love this chapter!

Okay this was WELL worth the wait
Once again I felt every word of Annie & Auggie's conversation in this chapter, you write them unlike anyone else on this site, with such emotional accuracy really incredible work

I do hope that when Annie & Auggie eventually reunite that is as beautiful and heartfelt as how you've written it here

I also adored the Castle quotes that bookended this great touch

I am happy that this arc has ended and I cannot wait to read & review what else you have,
please keep writing this story it is truly a gift :)

Wow, another incredibly, breath taking chapter! I hate to see this arc end, I'd love to see you keep it going. Excellent writing, you truly have a gift.

Perfection, as always.

So great deary 3 You totally fixed it xoxo

awwwwwww just awww

Ok. I just binge read all 15 chapters because I couldn't stop reading your work. I'm LOVING this. You've really captured the voices of the characters and the show. So well done. I'm totally hooked. Please post more soon!

Wow. Beautiful, just beautiful.

Most assuredly:-)

Love this!

I love the message underlying everything and every one. I love that you showed Joan, Arthur and Mackenzie as a family unit - still whole even after all they've been through. I love that Auggie and Annie are going to be okay - still solid and constant even after all that they've been through. I love that love conquers all.

Love this. Well done!

Wow this chapter was awesome!
I loved the Castle references very clever and appropriate :)

The dialogue in this installment particularly Annie & Auggie's was so impressively in character really amazing work!

I loved the individual moments Annie & Auggie both had with Joan & Arthur :)

Please update again soon I'd love to read a 'morning after' one-shot/chapter to this

Regardless please try and post more chapters soon I haven't realized how much I love this story until you updated it :)

I just cannot even. I stopped trying to mentally note moments to mention in my review about 3 sentences in. It was *all* so gorgeous.

This is what I *want* those first moments back to look like. It's what I think is most realistic, considering the last few images and bits of dialogue at the end of "Trompe Le Monde." Oh, I hope...

Brilliantly done. Thanks so much for writing this.