Nice! It's great! :)

That was so sweet.

Awww... I liked it.

Just a few things pertaining to commas... One, they should be used right before you end the quotes.

EX. "Just start without me," the boy named Tai said.

And they should also be used when someone speaks directly to someone else.

Ex. "Nice to meet you, Sora."

Other than that, I really liked it. :) It was cute. Being a soccer junkie myself, I don't find these types of one-shots boring.

Cute! They seem so sweet here!