Reviews for The First Time
derek chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
tifa saying to cloud I am ver y proud to be your savior
Shade the Hero chapter 9 . 1/23/2018
You are the master of writing cute fluffy family moments! Stahp! Wait, no, don't stop. They're too wonderful.
Shade the Hero chapter 8 . 1/22/2018
Holy crap! Mama Stife doesn't play around! Lol, but damn, only Tifa could have pulled that off! xD
Shade the Hero chapter 7 . 1/22/2018
Just when I thought Clpud couldn't get any cuter. Happy to be proven wrong tho. :3
Shade the Hero chapter 6 . 1/22/2018
D'aww this was sweet. And the other punks were actually being decent for a change? I likes! Beautifully done.
Shade the Hero chapter 5 . 1/22/2018
Damn, just...damn. I feel so bad for Cloud right now. Those stupid adults jumping to conclusions and assuming they're right without getting the whole story.
Shade the Hero chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
This was so fluffy and sweet. I loved it to bits! And I love how you made Tifa's story mirror their own future adventures. Lol.
Shade the Hero chapter 3 . 1/18/2018
Awww, poor Cloud at the end. I just wanna pick up a cardboard sword of my own and give those jerks a lesson in pain. Or better yet, where's my baseball bat? *cracks knuckles*
Shade the Hero chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Awww, she was watching him too. I love that!
Alcantis chapter 13 . 1/14/2018
I wonder if you'd still continue to their happy ending :)
Claire chapter 13 . 1/7/2015
Please continues! This story is amanzing!
JaimeRose chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
You haven't updated in a while. I love these stories and you are amazing at writing, please continue!
Hatsune.Miku2996 chapter 13 . 8/20/2013
love your story please continue
Girls In White Dresses chapter 13 . 8/15/2013
That was the sweetest story I've ever read! Cloud writing his feelings to Tifa was sooo sweet. Just so sweet and innocent and perfect! The ending was beautiful, I LOVED IT SOO MUCH. Yay, Zack! You nailed him. I hope to see more of him and possibly more of a heart to heart between him and Cloud :)

I really really loved this chapter it was just so lovely!
ffangelwing chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
I have always believed that for Cloud, Zack is more an older brother and a fatherly figure than a friend, so their friendship is very important for him, even if Cloud is still shy he can act like he is in reality and not pretend to be someone else, I guess Zack's upbeat personality does help.
So sad about the letters in the end, but well at least he did write his feelings.
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