:D Would you maybe consider adding to this?

awsome!

Funny!

Very cute! I liked the ending - the Perfect Dream part of it. Good job!

Ooh, very funny. This is certainly an interesting idea. I admit, I was expecting it to be a vomitting potion or something of that sort. A perfect dream potion was a good twist. And in the end, the last couple sentences left me wondering if the potion made them 'dream' about the mischevious Hermione.

I love this! It's so wonderful! I would also love it if you wrote more with this storyline! I'd love to see Fred George and Hermione prank Umbridge!

Awe! Cute ending:) Very funny idea for a story! You should make a sequel with Fred's dream, Umbridge's prank, and Fred and Hermione getting together!

-Lynn

lol, very smart boys. nice story.

hahahahaha this had me lol-ing so hard! i didn't realize that george told her the truth about what exactly the potion was...

Aww, I enjoyed this quite a bit. Good job. :)

It's short, funny and sweet :)

The scene flows really well and you've captured the characters beautifully. Thanks, I enjoyed reading it.