This is nice. You should continue to write more. This is very well-written. We read only Castle.

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That was a sweet story good job

eu chorei o inferno com essa fanfic. minha gargante apertou meu coração ficou lindo mas triste ao mesmo tempo em alguns momentos mais eu amei eles juntos. eles finalmente juntos mesmo que rick deve que levar um kate estando ali para lex.

lovely story :)

v gripping story

very heart wrenching

what a beautiful chapter with such strong emotion

Well, first, I (mostly) enjoyed the story a lot. The emotions, the characterizations. They all seemed right. BUT, (it's a big but), in Chapter 4, you did something in the story that a good author would NEVER do. You had your character say something that he would never really say. He said: "We did everything we could but – ". And then he stops?!

The doctor just stood still, he knew that everyone
reacted differently to this sort of news. He watched
as the two women who had been closest to the girl
slowly approached her.

He just watched?! If he was so stupid as to not realize that the family thought they were being told that the patient was dead with those few words, then he should go and kill himself. There is no way on God's green earth than any doctor, no matter how 'new' to doing this he was, would phrase it like that. If I had to try to phrase things from the poor choice of words that you used, he could have said: "We did every thing we could but - he won't wake up until tomorrow." The problem with this is, even THAT is not how they'd say it. Instead, they'd say something like: "He'll be unconcious for the next day or two, and we did everything we could". They would NOT let a doctor talk to family if he had less then 1 day of training, which is obviously all he has, based on your poor assumptions. I really don't like it when author's do something so contrived just to get shock value. Other writers on FanFiction have killed or nearly killed a character, but your attempt failed, not theirs.

Well, at least I know what author's to avoid.

You know I started reading this and then for some reason on chapter 2 I started thinking of everything Castle and Beckett have been through together and I was also listening to my music, or well random playlist with only one song on repeat.

Well as I read this story, and thought about everything, I feel this story was a hell of a read, with Wrecking Ball playing in the background. Think about the way they met, and then think about how perfect that song fits with them.

Anyway, I wouldn't have realized this with out reading your amazing story. Thanks for sharing. It was fantastic, and I loved how the title was the last word...Always.

loved this story! it is very well written, keeps the reader engaged, balances the inner thoughts and forward action in a satisfying way. well done!

It's a very good story. I really like it. Thank you.

beautiful. simply beautiful.

Well so much for waiting for my daughter to take a nap to read your story. I loved it so much! And yeah as expected I cried so much. I'm glad they got their happy ending.

Just wanted to let you know... chapters 6 & 8 are identical. I assume chapter 8's supposed to be something else?

Other than that, love the story!