So far this is really good! Though I would suggest italics for when someone is thinking something. It gets a tad hard to follow.

ohwhoa! you predicted that my croft's umbrella was a hidden sword since 2012!

Aw... Great story! I am crying now i-i

It was amazing! Thank you for this fanfiction, it was very pleasant to read. (Excuse my grammar, I'm French and I don't speak and write English very well!)

Has anyone ever told you that you are spectacularly good at destroying people's hearts? I just did. I have never been this emotionally involved in a story in my life, and that's saying a lot. I'm literally addicted to your writing.

JOHN! :...)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! 8::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::(
And that's all I have to say about that. :...(

Oh my goodness! I'm finally to the famous kidnapping chapter and I'm wigging out.

I think this chapter is charming, and definitely not as bad as you think it is.

I really love this story, I am currently bawling my eyes out at John's speech 8:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::0
I could not stop smiling through tears at how you portray Mycroft. I never know what to think of Mycroft, whether to yell at him or cheer,but the way you portray him, not only does he stay in character, I've learned to adore him and cheer him on. Thank you

this is former reviewer just me with an account now. i love your star fics and now have the capability to fav them,so here goes!

You have a serious problem with your "to's and too's"... And that's annoying.
As for the story, liking it so far...

Wonderful fic! I am excited to read the sequel. I already have it loaded up in a different tab... ;)

Well now they know Sherlock has a very highly connected older brother with similar detective skills. Not such a freak after all, huh?

They messed with the wroooong family by accusing Sherlock of being a fake.

I just got into Sherlock and have only seen seasons 1 & 2.

Loving this! Reading on...

Have to stop reading at this point, been close to tears for most of it. This is truly wonderful, and I hope you do write the last part of the trilogy to give everyone the happy ending they deserve!