This is so beautiful and so sad!

And also, unexpectedly hilarious when you described how Mamo had to try and manoeuvre into his apartment with an Usagi attachment.

I think I love how much you've shown not only Mamo's devotion to Usagi, but also his desperate need for her too, the most. I've read so few fics where we get that kind of insight into his mind, it's always about him being her rock, but never how he needs her too. The way you portrayed that is just perfect to me.

I don't know how you could continue this, but if you ever were to, I'd be one of the first to read it.

Thank you for writing such an amazing insight!

This was a very good story.

Mamo-chan! You should loosen up and be each other rock! Stars -for me has always been the saddest. SilMil, even with a lot of deaths, at least they died together, only experience separation in a little mount of time.. Stars is basically a reboot of Silmil, only worse. Its a slow, heavy, torture for Usagi... imagine having your loves, one by one in a span of a year. That must have been a nightmare year for Usagi.

Nice. After reading the other fic, I understand this one better.

Mamoru didn't want to be an annoyance and wanted to be strong, but that only made his own fears grow. It's really good you wrote the other fic, otherwise this would had been a pretty sad read.

Good job

nice

Best fanfiction I've read. Wonerfully in-character.

Just wonderful!

VERY well written. Thanks for sharing.

I liked it. I really like your style of writing, the descriptions, everything! I only wish that there was more. As I got to the end, I was expecting to get to more, almost as it built right to the climax, as you where just getting sucked right into it, it ended D;

Shows how good you are bringing your audience in though 'cause I did really enjoy it :)

Good little one shot! (Y)

Absolutely breathtaking.

This is both heartbreakingly beautiful and absolutely brilliant. I always wanted to know what happened exactly after Galaxia's "defeat" in Stars when Mamoru was "alive" again, and this captures the terror, uncertainty, and emotional aspects of it so vividly. I love the little details you threw in, like that reference to Usagi choosing the stuffed animals in Super S, and how Usagi had memories of calling his number just to hear his voice when she knew subconsciously that he was dead or consciously that he wouldn't be there because he's not even in the country anymore. I also love Mamoru's emotions and the way he grapples woith himself, wanting and knowing that Usagi could help ease his "insanity" and bring him to light, but also knowing that the knowledge might destroy her more than anything else that had happened so far and bring those memories back to the forefront of her mind when all he wanted to do was take away HER pain and keep her happy. I love that he proves that he's human and considers telling her, but ultimately chooses to be her anchor because he knew that she, who was still so young and had experienced so much, relied upon him for strength and he just couldn't do that to her. You write these characters so well and their feelings seem so real, and I applaud you for that. Please continue writing,. I really enjoyed this fic and I hope to see more U/M stories from you in the future because you truly have a talent for them. Excellent work!

Wow, that was really amazing. Such anguish. I was totally captivated the whole time. I really wanted to read more, but it works at the length it's at. Well done.

Sad but lovely!

That was a truly beautiful story. I actually think it works rather well as a one-shot-not that I would complain if you built on it, of course, but I am satisfied with how it is. I loved how it came full circle back to the darkness/nothingness. And I also liked the detail about the answering machine, as well as the comment about him fearing a nurturing mother.