Hmmm...not bad...a little short though

Awww that's it? Ok you need to write another chapter. The song brought a tear to my eye. :-)

Hello sorry for posting this in reviews of my own story for all I know this could be as some would call it a "MEGA NO-NO." However I would like to personally thank each and everyone of you for reading my stories thanks. -bows-

Seems likea good story. Please keep on writing! I want to know what is going to happen.

oooooooooooooo I like how that ended! Thanks for saving that last piece! You better post some more...I want to read!

so...does that count for a positive review lol

Plz you have to continue this story.

Also just a piece of constuctive critzism instead of writting "-scene shift-" just put a line break like this: -

Just a piece advice not trying to be a flamer you're story is great. plz continue

ooooh, this is really good! i love the way you had lightning enter his subconcious, thats a really cool idea. i cant wait to see what happens next, please update soon! :D