Interesting start if a bit short but will give it a chance.

Bravo!

hello to person who wrote this disclaimer :)

if too much Natural Energy turns a person into a statue, what does it do to a statue?

I have to admit that it is a little weird seeing naruto act and talk this way, but other than that pretty good so far.

It was truly an interesting story. And I am glad it had a happy ending . Though I didn't like the concept of Gods giving someone life and just taking it away. Reminded me of the Ancient Greek Gods . It makes me wonder didn't Minato deserve a life too with Kushina? The answer he did but he never got it which was unfair.

This story reminded me of the story of the Pygmalion but with a far better ending.

The ending was short but okay. But is it truly a good ending? I can't say. From what I understand from this story, even though Naruto will live and grow old with Hinata but after death whereas Hinata will move in to after life, Naruto will simply go back to his statue existence. Which I think is wrong, he along with Minato and others like him deserve a proper afterlife, maybe even heaven for all the things they have done.

But in any case I liked this story, not as much as your other story, The Psychic, Wizard and Swordsman though. But it's one of those feel good stories which makes you feel better about this world.

Finally I hope that you may one day write a sequel to this story, describing further adventures of Naruto and Hinata. Please think about my suggestion.

All the best!

Short ending for a great story, we don't need to know any more details.

Thank you for giving us such interesting story.

Sorry but the ending is BS. To rushed to quick and thrown together. As someone who enjoyed your story all the way till now this is disappointing. It should have been way more than 600 words. Make it count and make it big. Go out with a huge awesome chapter.

Thank you for the wonderful story.

SaiYakumo has been seen in some fanfic, I guess.
KibaIno is kinda weird, but fun.
GaaraMatsuri SHOULD have been canon actually.
SasuSaku is a necessary evil, though it kinda sucks.
NaruHina FTW!

beautiful ending to a good story! Congratulations on finishing and I look forward to more stories! You've earned this favorite and follow!

Thanks for deciding to have them cameo. Congrats on finishing this story!

Predictable for a happy ending, lol.
It WOULD be cruel to NOT end it something like this, ya know.

Excellent work as always, I chuckled a lot in the part where Orochimaru's old team defeated him while he still believed that he actually had a chance against their combined might.

So Naruto and Gaara will have the chance to live normal lives? That's great, I can't wait to see the epilogue.

P.D.

Did you read Naruto Gaiden?

His future is now his to decide. Glad Naruto's free.