Reviews for 18 Karat Run: A Courier's Tale
dreamordont chapter 1 . 5/26
4 years give or take since this was last updated hope all is well this was my favorite take on new vegas sad to see it will never get the ending it truly deserves either way in enjoyed the
timeni spent with these characters now it's time to say goodbye.
MoonBurner chapter 4 . 3/28
I loved that revolver. Kept it as my secondary all the way through because it looked so cool.
Kittycatmeowface chapter 12 . 8/5/2019
Your the second one I've read to actually bring Christine and Veronica back together. The first was Sheason's story. Thank you for that, I've always been frustrated that Veronica never got a happy ending in the game. You write good my dude, though you kinda made the romance a bit rushed in my opinion. Interactions are absolutely solid between the characters, though again a bit rushed with how quickly they got along. Veronica gave her quest way too quickly for my liking.
Angry Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
If you're not going to update in nearly two years, you should just delete this story.
N7FairytailWizard chapter 41 . 8/17/2017
Gah! Where'd you go? Got to ch 41, then poof! Need more please. It's one of the few things that gets me through work
A fan chapter 41 . 10/13/2016
Please don't act like a SJW when you write on Maxson in the FO4 story. He's honestly a really interesting character and practically all the BOS's info on synths is incorrect. The whole "Arthur killed Sarah" conspiracy is retarded cuz Arthur was only 11 when she died and he idolized her. I personally believe that the story where a 13 yr old Maxson kills the deathclaw is true since Quinlan says so but chances are he was wearing power armor and/or killed it from a safe distance. I would also like to note that he has continued some of Lyons' teachings(he wants to stop the Institute to save humanity where most of the BOS would do it solely for the tech. There's also the fact that he approved creating better rad-aways and that they(Maxson's BOS) has created prosthesis legs). So please don't act like an SJW and make him be all like Hitler and shit. Also remember that if you destroy the Prydwen you're killing countless squires. I'd like to suggest reading the outgoing mail terminal about the BOS soldier on his 1st tour of duty. Gave me a bad case of the feels. Also The Capital Wasteland has apparently become so safe that people hunt ferals for sport. Last but not least, Liberty PrimeProudwing cuz what is Mannis can never die. Thanks
Alexeij chapter 8 . 6/15/2016
Aliens are damn right to fear Boone. Everyone should fear Boone.

Quite canon compliant, but I liked Andy with his cane. I suppose you'll skip the ghouls to a later time though. Shame, that quest has potential to sell.

Also, I never figured how why Jeanne May acted the way she did. Jealousy? Competition? Resentment? Simple greed? Bah.
Alexeij chapter 6 . 6/15/2016
Excellent banter and all characters were spot-on. Only Six's willingness to check on Nipton without the promise of reward felt a bit off.

Cass's conflict was great, and the way you worked around McLafferty's quest simple but awesome. Justifies well why Cass would choose to trail behind this swaggering stranger she just met. Gratitude is a strong motivation.

Now I'm curious to see how you'll handle Nipton and good ol' Vulpes.
Alexeij chapter 5 . 6/15/2016
Right. You slip, the wasteland doesn't forgive. Farewell Deckard, you fell to the cursed words 'I hope you'll hang around'. None of that for Meyers (and then...).

I noticed a great improvement in style between the first two or three chapters and the next ones, right after Six leaves Goodsprings. I like the pacing and the dialogue a lot, especially because you don't seem afraid of straying from the canon path and don't rely on the game's dialogue. GJ.
Alexeij chapter 4 . 6/14/2016
Great chapter. Deckard is a likeable character you don't see very much in NV novelization and you portrayed him competent and confident enough it doesn't strike me as odd that he'd be out there hunting gangers on his own. I hope he sticks around, maybe for a pass at Eddie's.

The dialogue and banter was down to earth realistic and hilarious at the same time, I loved it. Gj.
just to read 49 chapter 41 . 6/13/2016
Glad to see you're back I missed this story
dreamordont chapter 41 . 6/12/2016
Been following this story for awhile now and despite delays and life you still are trying to finish it bravo as always great chapter it's great to see it progress again thank you for taking one of my favorite games and making something incredible with the story.
Oddliver chapter 41 . 6/12/2016
Great chapter as always, was happy to see this updated when i checked my favourites
Guest chapter 37 . 6/12/2016
Nice new chapter
Phoenix operative chapter 40 . 3/21/2016
Really glad this story isn't dead. Loved the chapter.
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