Please updated soon love to see how chopper franky smoker and law will react to her

It lives! Looking forward to more.

Cool chapter continue please.

Is this gonna be word for word from the anime with a little romance and a different df sprinkled in?

win is the next chapter coming.

Hope you continue this soon. My theory is that Lara is a sea queen.

Zoro x lara

great story! where's the rewrite? it says on the summary that's it rewritten. look forward to reading more

I am excited for the next chapter! I am curious how the fight between Alrong and Lara is going to go with Lara's water and Alrong being a fish man. I hope you update soon.

Can't wait for the fight against Along, and also I was wondering when Lara and Smoker fight, how does water effect smoke? Beside Zoro and Sanji liking Lara, maybe Smoker will have a crush on Lara as well.

Can't for the fight against Arlong, and also I was wondering when Lara and Smoke fight how does water effect smoke, and also maybe Smoker can have a crush on Lara

more, more chapters. I like your Luffy

I’ve actually already read this story but I decided to start it from the beggginning. I enjoy this story a lot, I’m always a sucker for AUs. Anyway I noticed a few grammatical errors in your wiring and I hope it isn’t offensive to you if I try to do a little proofreading here.

The stuff in ((is the original text)) the stuff in are my reccomended fixes and stuff in are notes

“Once upon a time, there ((is was))
There is no need for both is and was, you only need was.

a great Pirate King ((goes by the name of))

You don’t need this here you can just put a comma or just say ‘named’. Also want to keep your tenses consistent and since you’re talking about something that has already happened it should be past tense

Gol D. Roger, others call him Gold Roger, he ((is)) was the fiercest, and most respected Pirate that ever ((sails)) sailed the sea. He had conquered the sea and ((obtains)) obtained the greatest treasure of all…the One Piece.

But alas his fame ((has short ended)) was short and ended
That was just kind of confusing so I tried to make it a bit clearer

when the Marines ((have))
You don’t need anything here you can just say, ‘...when the Marines captured...’

captured the elusive Pirate King and ((ready)) readied to execute him, but before he ((dies)) died his dying word ((has driven)) drove countless souls to the sea.

"You want my treasure, you can have it, I left it all together in one place…the One Piece, now you just have to find it"

Now every ((Pirate)) pirate
‘Pirate’ doesn’t need to be captiluzed unless it’s part of a title like ‘The Pirate King’ or at the begginning of a sentence.

from around the world is traveling through the Grand Line in ((hope)) hopes of finding the Pirate King's treasure, the world has entered the Great Pirate Era.

I’ll stop here because this is already getting really long. I know I proofread something from a while ago but I want to start at the beginning. I really really hope this isn’t offensive I just want to help a little with proofreading since I enjoy this story.

So, what are you going to do about Princess Shirahoshi?

If I may, I think in skypeia, a new version of Lara's power should awaken with weather, since I read that some mermaids can control weather patterns, or even have antifreeze enzymes in her body to protect her from the cold or thunder.
wonder if some villains will be lusting after her? (Wapol, Lucci, Doflamingo, ect.)
these are just some suggestions.
thanks!