Lol and Itachi is treated like an angel

I know this fanfic is some years old but what were you thinking? Hes 8, f'n EIGHT, you're a pedophioe, sick bastard

Sorry couldn’t bring my self to read this story with your sorry excuse of a romance. Yugito 16 and naruto 8? Please if it was the other way around people would call the man a pedophile. How can she be attracted to a 8 old kid makes no sense how quickly you make her attracted to naruto let alone how easily naruto understands romance a young age even more so being deprived of affection. If theirs a age gap couldn’t you wait until naruto was a reasonable age like 14-15? If not make them the same age or close again just saying the truth pretty dam cringe.

Sigh I detest when he's given two last names makes no sense show me one person in Naruto verse with two last names none troublesome

troublesome

So annoying the logic here “damn they just opened that scroll and some weird energy entered them, it could either be extremely dangerous or good but I’m NOT gonna tell them what it is at all...” and then Narutos is like “wow something weird just happened but I’m not gonna question it AT ALLL even though Kyuubi, my girlfriend warned me not to open it before I did and now she looks shocked but I’m not gonna question it and just shrug it off” like dude that’s just annoying . I get it it’s some weird power up but it’s so illogic for Kyuubi NOT to even tell them about it or Naruto and the either to even question about it. They just all shrugged it off when it happened , that what bothers me .

That was so dramatic holy shit. “Omg I just had my first kill . The person who said that he was gonna kill us and possibly rape my crush and sell her” *goes Kyuubi mode* “AHHHHHHHH” the fuck kinda reaction is that . I understand the crying and shit but going Kyuubi mode doesn’t make sense at all. Doesn’t it respond to his rage or something so stupid

I'm of mind that Naruto's actual mission completion looks something like this currently:
15 C, 8 B, 2 A.
He's been a genin for 5 years after all, and has worked with, what I can more or less safely assume to be a chunin and a jonin (Yugito and Killer B) for most of them.

MOTHERFUCKER, I THOUGHT A SAID THAT HE WOULD NEVER HAVE TO DO A SINGLE D-RANK MISSION!

remembering that Naruto is 8
remembering that as a 16 year old, Yugito should be quite developed
Naruto and Yugito consider boning each other
Cringe as I consider this in terms of realistic interactions.
Still good story though.

When Darui said "man how dull are you to Target a fourteen years old boy." All I could think is
"Itachi your orochimaru is showing.

Well I hope u continue this story it really good

Thank you, I think it should be removed if you can't stay to it enough effort to put a finish to it.

Yeah... this story went to garbage real fast.

Thanks for the story up til 2 chapters ago it was a nice read and then you brought Konoha back into the mix and messed everything up. Typical.

“Neji grinned...”

Wut?

I trying to picture that stoic SOB grinning and it’s coming out like one of the Joker’s grins. Yikes.