Hey Kurt! This is DW, I have to say I have enjoyed reading your stories from start to finish, this is the kind of stuff fanfiction and writing should be made of! Hope the best for you and I hope we can eventually see this finale all the way to the end!

Hey are you gonna finish the story

Kurt how are you doing and how was Danny doing

MinsterSweetGoodKid I believe in God also

RichardTerminator hey how are you doing well I was wondering if you believe in God or not if you don't than how was your sister Zira doing

I hope Danny catch that son of a bitch and kills him

Very interesting chapter, it's great to see this story going again. Keep up the amazing work. Love your stories.

I'm glad u got my messege man . Good luck with he army my friend . I look forward to the next chapter when ever it comes out ill be looking forward to reading it . By the way I have a requsest to make ? U know when Danny and z were mentioning having a baby that they couldn't . Are u planing to have a surprise pregness ? I could realy pic Danny and zee being parents . I'm ready now dude . When ever you have time can u do another chapter ? Goo speed my friend and huckana Matata means no worrys friend !

My god man it's been over 3 years since you last did an update. hope you keep it up

Hey! Have u given up the story man like seriesly where's the updates man . Iv been waiting for a respons for a hole year ! If your not going to complet it then give it to someone else ! I'm tired of waiting this story is so good ! So don't waist it man . Pleas hurry it up dude or dudet !

Pleasa contuinue the story don't quit now man your just getting started . I want to see more zee and Dan romance moments . And of corse I'd like to see Zara in it to .

Great chapter, what does the visions truly mean?

Another great chapter as always. I have no major issues with how things are progressing and the plot is moving at a reasonable pace. There are only a few things I would suggest looking at.

I would ask for some more growth on the relationship with Danny and Zainabu. They have finally married and have "adapted" to their circumstance. It would be great to see the struggles they must go through and prove they are meant for each other. We need to see more of Tavira. It would be wonderful to see her grow as a character and mature. You did great on expressing her and you gave a genuine feeling of sadness in her disbelief. Lastly, I ask we focus on fewer topics each chapter. We jump around a lot and I would find a more immersive experience focusing on only a few characters, instead of five or six.

You did very well and your romance was not to be scorned. My advice would be to focus more on character feelings. You describe their actions more than their feelings. If you show more of their feelings it would give a bigger impact. Overall, good job and if you feel I wasn't specific enough; you know where to look for me.

I'm glad your passion for this story is coming back because ours has never dimmed. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Good Luck!

Man, that tavira needs to calm down and be patent, love will come, she doesn't know it yet.

Nice job man, I think you have been doing a good job with character development for the new lions, although I am a little bit confused as to who is who's child, are there just some background characters you haven't mentioned? If not, then a list of who's related to who would be appreciated. Can't wait for Danny and Dasyu to meet face to face (again). Keep up the good work :)