Oh boy. Emotional twister

This entire story is completely wonderful. I love how it builds and flows and I love the characters development throughout! Amazing!

Perfect ending to one hell of a great fic!

I can't wait to read more of your writing

Thanks for putting this fic up for all of us

Fantastic - in character for both of them; especially with that last bit of Sherlock still not vocalising even though he tried and Molly was asleep...great writing

Hah! I loved Mrs Hudson's reaction to Sherlock's return. Perfect!

OOOhhhhh they're starting off on the right foot, Sherlock saying the right thing FOR ONCE!

And I'm loving the suspense at the end of this chapter...propelling me into the next chapter immediately :D

I know in your notes you seem to think that Sherlock would be perceived as ooc - I think you got him bang on. You are an excellent writer - you've captured these 2 characters so well

And now, on to the next chapter! (:

I almost just hit 'Next' without commenting because I was so eager to continue the story!

I love this chapter; the detail about the bite mark, Sherlock showing up at the graveyard...and Molly's continued offer to help.

LOVE IT.

Chapter 4, comment 4 - this story is still awesome!

And now...on to chapter 5 :D

Reichenbach from Molly’s pov must be a bastard to write - and I am so impressed by how you got it so right

...I am LOVING this fic!

Oh Sherlock! Your feelings are showing :)
I hope you still get notifications for this fic, because it truly is such a wonderful piece of writing
My heart keeps going out to Molly, and to feel empathy towards a character thanks to the writing is really incredible and reflects so well on you as an author

I just discovered this fic and I am so glad it has come into my life!
Your writing of this first chapter is fantastic- I cannot wait to read the rest :)

"Injured arm and cheek"? When did she injure them and how? It's been ~2 months since the attack and she's been fully recovered for a while. Unless I somehow scrolled over something else she hasn't been hurt since so I'm a little confused.

funnily enough you were quite close to the canon (faking the death)

OMG I LOVE THIS! STARTING THE SEQUEL WHEN I WAKE UP BC IT'S ALMOST 4AM NOW HAHA