Lots of faults but overall a decent read.

Oh fucking cringe. 'avada kadavra green' for the love of oblivion, just call it the killing curse.

What does Vivec think of the spell "Vivec's Kiss"?

You know... Snape was basically a half Jew(muggle) surrounded by Hitler youth neo Nazis(Pure Blood Death Eaters) that was abused by his Jewish father.

His best friend, Lily, is both his salvation and the reason for his suffering, as James wanted her, and tormented Snape for "having" her.

The Gryffindor are basically radicals who oppose Slythrin, regardless of the individual persons personality.

Gryffindors are also, to Snape, radical jew(muggle) supporters.

This was made worse by Lily being a Gryfindor, like his tormentors, who seemingly universally support Jews(muggles) like his abusive father, the daughter of two Jews(muggles), and the reason he was targeted by Gryffindors.

He finally had enough and had a meltdown, after he was humiliated yet again.

People have been broken and made to adopt ideologies for less.

This obvious cry for help was used as evidence that he was evil, wherein Lily, the girl Snape still loved despite everything, who then went on to have sex with James, Sapes main tormentor, who only ever saw Lily as an object to be won.

This pushed him over the edge.

What does all this have in common? For Snape, all his enemies were born from Jews (muggles)(his father, Lilly) or supported them radically; the Gryffindors and Jame's Mauraders.

The Death Eaters, who were the only ones who opposed what he probably saw as his enemies, and felt he had no no other option but to join, resulting him becoming an unsympathetic, borderline sociopathic neo Nazi terrorist against all Jews and Jew born people(muggle and muggleborns) and their supporters(Gryffindors).

This led him to hate the society that led to his suffering, that left him with his abusive Jew(muggle) father. Thus began his life of neo Nazi terrorism.

Young child Snape was sympathetic. His adult, Death Eater self deserves no such thing as sympathy.

The Jew (muggle) and neo Nazi Hitler youth (Death Eater) comparison is just to detail how Snapes life would have been viewed from his own perspective, rather than the Gryffindor one.

This is how I see Snapes life, but while sympathetic, I do not like him as a person. I fell sorry for the fictional child that was twisted into Severus Snape the Death Eater, but not his adult self.

He, even through all of this, redeemed himself in the end.

It's nice to see a version of Lily who begins to realize this at the end, and regrets at least some of it.

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

Would you kindly fix the spelling of Nerevarine in the description? It's a bit distracting.

Awesome story so far. I can't wait to see how the rest of it goes. Keep the good work! :)

Just thought you'd want to know. In your numbered notes for this chapter, not the ones for the omake, you have the text for numbers 4 and 5 flipped. Also, with the numbers in the chapter itself, you wrote 4 twice and dropped 9 entirely as they are offset by one.

WYF is with the sudden and pointless paragraphs all over the place!? Take them away! It's making it hard to read! And unless you're american, it's mum, not mom. America is literally the only country to misspell it like that.

Babies never should eat mush; they should only ever eat either milk or solids. Never mush, if isn't good for them. Why would you want a fussy eater? And if you're worried about a baby being unable to eat solids, don't bother. If that was the case, humanity couldn't possibly exist. Besides fruit exists and a lot of fruit is, for lack of a better word, 'mushy' like bananas.

Had a lot of fun reading what you've put up so far. Hope you get the spark back for this story.

I have just saved this chapter. I will never unread what I've read as it is one of the funniest things ever. This chapter had me in tears I was laughing 's hard. Thank you!

sweet cant wait to read it

PLEASE! IT'S SO BEAUTFIFUL! PLEASE UPDATE!

Will admit I now say "For the love of little apples" when I screw something up lol