Well, I don't know much about My Little Pony, as I've never seen the show, nor do I plan to, and I haven't read any other MLP fanfics. So my knowledge on MLP is very limited.

But this story was surprisingly great. The detail was great, and the tone was my favourite part. The contrast between the brutal torture and Pinkie's joyful manners provide excellent dark comedy. It works for some reason. Honestly, her taking out Dash's organs and making a series of puns actually made me laugh out loud. Mr. Blue Sky playing in the background made this one of the oddest, yet most enjoyable experiences I have gotten from reading any fanfiction.

As I mentioned, I don't know much about MLP, but I can tell that each character stays in character. Pinkie is her usual joyful self, I think. I don't know.

I heard this from my archive of origin, the Rio archive. The story Happy Birthday! by BlueTech is what introduced me to this story, and I am glad I read it. This was such an odd experience, but it was so fun to read. Maybe Mr. Blue Sky playing on repeat made the experience as such. That song fits brutal torture scenes so well that its honestly scary.

In conclusion, this story was excellent and was an enjoyable dark comedy. I do consider it such, as Pinkie cracks way too many jokes and is way too energetic for this not to be a dark comedy. I know this story definitely pissed of many MLP fans, and I can see why. But for me, this was a great and fun story.

Sincerely,
Proffesor Ass Spiders

It would have probably been less horrific if it was all a very very very VERY bad dream in Rainbow Dash's head... God, what is wrong with this Sergeant Sprinkles guy?!

Absolute horsehit (pun intended) This, along with Rainbow Factory is one of the most retarded, try-hard edgy crap I had the disgrace to read. The only reason these stupid stories are remotely popular is because most of the MLP fanbase never saw a horror movie before, and they would have been easily impressed with any shit.

Is amazing how people constantly shits on stuff like Eyeless Jack yet they still believe this crap is any good. I bet "Sergeant Sprinkles" (Even his nickname is cringeworthy) is one of those fedora-wearing creeps that would love to put his tiny dick inside the asshole of the characters of that overrated horror shows. I wont be surprised if he had lots and lots of folders containing gross pony porn, he seems the kind of guy who would something like that.

This is better than all of Eogrus' fanfics!

i agree with you Saw theory it certainly seems plausible

I feel like there needs to be a crossover between this and Rainbow factory

Huuu...I read so many fic summary's that kept referring to 'cupcakes' that I finally just gave in and read it. Sadly I find it very unoriginal. This is a repost as I'm aware but, I'm really not getting the hype. I'm majorly into MLP and gore if it's well written. It's brilliantly written in terms of sentence structure and detail but the plot is generic and there is no substance to it. As a multichapter fic this could have really been cool, but its boring. So yup.

I listened to the adio book with my cuz and she had nightmares for a week :p

Oh my god...

Whoever wrote this should be sent to a mental institution. This is not only awful and disgusting, but it makes me worried about the author and all the people that they are probably endangering

OMG HOW... WH...WHA...I give up

SHIT! WHY THE FUCK DO I LIKE THIS!

I Love it :L

that was so so so so so scary and gory you were totally right and also thank you for writing this because after a while all i wanted was to hear more like i got used to it

To be honest that wasnt nearly as twisted as it could've been its not even like itll give me nightmares or anything so all in all good job