I love the way you've written this story. it has a lot of depth and details i would've never though about. The character development is pretty awesome, and I'd love to see what you come up with next.

Great chapter, really loved reading this story it is one of the best I have read, can’t wait to read more :)

Okay now honestly, this is the BEST STORY not even fanfiction but STORY I ever had. You captured me from the beginning and got me ever since. I mean really completely got me and this story makes me feel all over the place and it’s just so INCREDIBLY awesome that I I really can’t stop reading and am so sad that the next chapter will be the last( hopefully for now ;)) I really really love you for writing this. It’s amazing. Thank you soo much for making this whole week for me sooo amazing through your story.

Now I’m don rambling. Sorry, just really had to get this out. Have a nice day!

Your writing style has much improved. I probably read the first couple chapters of this story many years ago and didn’t find it to my taste. So I was much confused when I began reading it on ao3 and it seemed both very familiar and very different. I started to fall in love with all the good, bad, and difficult choices made in the story

Excited to hear what happens next. Take your time, looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Once again another wonderful chapter please keep working on this.

I offer you my husband as payment for you to continue this beautiful story

This is so amazing. Cant wait for the next update!

Taylor x x

I love authors like you who stuck this long to their story. It doesn't matter to me how long it takes for you to update, as long as you update I'll keep waiting. I can see the dedication and I love it. Keep up the good work

Oh yes I am still reading... definitely worth continuing! *fans self*

I’m so glad you updated! I check this every so often to see if you have! Hope to read more soon :)

This update made my day, thank you! Savra's experience with the Apple and Altair's reaction...not to mention they finally did it ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

when will I stop yelling! I've missed this so much!
Savra asking if she's enough? Altair loving her?
G O D

When I saw you had finally updated I gasped out loud, lol. I was so scared you wouldn’t again, it’d been so long, and this is the only continuing fanfic I keep up with anymore...but you did and it was worth it! This character development in Savra, the continuing development of their relationship, now the Apple’s involved...! I need more.
Of course as always take your time with writing, but I hope you do post another chapter soon. I can’t wait! :)

YASSSSSS! You updated!
I was just thinking about this story the other day too haha
I'm so impressed by this chapter as well since it's about god damn time they went at it XD
It was written so well and didn't feel out of place which I'm surprised because when I got to that part I was like "Oh fuq, for real? It's happening?!" Ahha but by the end I can't help but ship these two harder than ever. When she mentioned she was going to stop him I was like , no bitch, suck it up! Altair was awesome here. I think it's nice to see him grow out of his "cold" persona. Savra too. She's changed for the better and I want to see where you will take them after this.

I'm just so happy to see you are continuing. I plan on rereading the story but I was too excited so i read this chapter first!

I'm kind of obsessed with AC Odyssey right now (hooray for female protags!) and Ill be honest and say it's hard for me to remember much about the first AC after all these years but I still love this story! Please keep going!