Please finish this, it's really good and Eve is a great character who fits right into the Dresden Files world.

I love Your story and looking anxiously for a further story

wath hapen next. you stop before we know the end of the history, I keep wathing for a good end do not take to long please.

Darlin I love your story I was wondering when some more is forthcoming?

I don't know much kabbalism but this is a very interesting story.

Why did you stop! Continue, you must continue! It was really good, you had me laughing so hard I was in tears, now I'm in tears because you stopped! Please post the next chapter!

Wahahahaha! I meant to wait until I caught up but I just had to share my feelings of mirth about that Kincaid happy meal thing! And then there was the part about men in the last chapter and oh, it's just to much! I love you, you are an amazing writer, I can't wait to read more!

Freaking awesome story. cant wait for more.

Oh, this is just too good. I love how Eve internalizes her maternal instincts, how she sees the world as her children and wants to treat them as such. Brilliant work! Truly brilliant.

Oh, my word! I had to bite my tongue so I didn't laugh too loud. This is such a unique and entertaining concept for a story. I look forward to finishing it.

Pretty good story so far. I am a little concerned about Eve. She is set up as a well networked super heavy weight. Plot thrives on problems and you seem to be making her a little too "awesome" Regardless, I will cheer for you.

Glad to see the new chapter E.R. I have been/am waiting almost patiently. The story has me hooked. Nice work!

Finally ! I thought you may have abandoned this story. Very enjoyable. Thank you. I love seeing Harry from someone elses point of view.

Great work, as usual - Butcher-worthy. please update soon.

Yes! Its about time someone stuck it to Murphy and I really like the way you portray Thomas. Please keep going this is a really good read, thanks for sharing