So good! Wish we would've seen the knights come see Merlin after he came back

I am a tearful snotty mess, this was incredibly well-written. Damn, I need a hug

ok everything up until Merlin dying by bandit was good, but really that's a bit insulting to him.

Then there is the whole theory where Merlin's magic heals him faster than a normal person and he was using it to protect himself. Then Merlin is Emrys which supposedly means he is immortal and can't die. If this Lilith lived with the druids for so long and knows who Arthur is supposed to be than she should know who Merlin is before he dies, if she's been watching for so long.

Anyway just some overlooked plot holes.

Great story so far. I suggest breaking up the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs to mimic the pause and flow of the narrative.

Poor Merlin. Arthur doesn't deserve him.

Is Arthur really that cruel that he wouldn't let Merlin eat? He wouldn't stop any of his hounds from eating, I'm sure.
Arthur deserves what's coming to him.

oh thank god that's how it ended! wish I could have read gwaine seeing merlin thoughI just love those two as big/little brother

:0 ...why...

Really wish you'd post a non slash version of this. I'd like to read it

Ahhhh...It was really adorable... I loved it.
Thanks for writing something this amazing

This chap was amazing! UPDATE PLZZZ

yeAH i REALLY LIKED IT~
Good job

I really liked this story! Keep up the good work!

Loved this!
The concept of Arthur becoming invisible and silent was well thought out and very interesting.
Thank you so much for writing, posting, and completing this story, it's appreciated.

The ending seemed rather abrupt but I enjoyed this story.