I know at this point that you have finished this story but I think Peeta should be her father. She can grey eyes because her mother has grey eyes. Funny thing...my youngest son has grey eyes, my oldest son golden brown while mine are green and my husbands are blue. If you were to go on hair and eyes alone. You wouldn't think they belong to me but if you look at their face, you can see it.
Great story so far.

I like thr the story so far. I would love to see the pictures but I can't. Great work though.

I'm done this is absolutely stupid. You made the doctor so fucking ooc it pisses me off. There are 3 things that would PISS the doctor off so much that if you are in his way you will never even knew you existed. First is genoside. second is the harming of children. And the harming, threatening, or kidnapping of his friends/companions. (Hey genius. The fucking capitol just broke number 2 and 3. If you really knew the doctor then you would have portrayed him correctly. Not this sit back and watch bullshit.) you ruined his character and for that I am done.

Dude what is this. The moment that the doctor found out about this arena he would dismantle the Capitol with six words.

Good.

I'm so glad the story is back on. Thanks.

I think the story is perfect. I'm only on chapter 6 but I really am enjoying it.

Wowzers!

I love this story! Update soon please!

Your update was a truly good surprise for me, and I'm not disappointed. I just wished that chapter slightly longer, but if the Epilogue IS longer, that's not a problem. (If the epilogue is small as well, this is a shame.)

About the Epilogue, I guess the TARDIS will go to New Earth in the catkind hospital ? (I can't wait for the Doctor becoming the Oncoming Storm, and beating the crap out of Snow and his lackeys...).

Great chapter! You did an awesome job. :) I can't wait for the epilogue. Hopefully after you can continue with Stale Bread which is an AWESOME story as well and I have missed reading it. Keep up the great work :)

oh my goodness i love this, is there more? there has to be mor, please update soon :)

That is such a clif hanger!
Please uplod soon, I could call it my birthday present. ;)

excellent i only have time to read one chapter but m defenetly following to read the rest!

Your greatest episode.

For many episodes, we could almost forget the "Doctor Who" side of the fic, we were only in Games. And Beeta was a shy and scared girl, pulled in that horror. And now, she reveals herself as strong as the Doctor, and we retrieve the "Doctor Who" side. And as a final twist.

Eager to see what follows, now. First, what the boys will choice. And then, how they will win against Snow.