Wiat wait wait is that the solar system?

Another great chapter can't wait to see what is to come.

This should be an interesting meeting

Nice chapter, good work.

YES! IT'S STILL ALIVE!

Talon thinking that great Force secrets, superb light saber skills and using the fresher are in the same level of knowledge was so cute!
Nice chapter, good work.

I was just thinking about this story and wondering we would see an update or if I missed it. Guess I know know. Great story keep up the great work.

Talon sleeping beneath Leia's bed was oddly adorable, The death of the Grand Master was quite lackluster though...

Nice seeing a new update, keep up the good work.

Another great chapter, I was sad to see it stop so soon. Seeing the E-mail in my inbox saying that another chapter was released brought a smile to my face and the chapter certainly didn't disappoint. This very FF has actually made me decided to try my hand at a few SW FFs that I now have cluttering my PC desktop, I tried my hand at a couple of non-SW FFs in the last couple of months and I even uploaded two of them, but they are not very good and I stopped updating them after a few chapters each. Your writing beats most of the professional writers that I read, I can't wait to see any other updates that you may post! While I am not familiar with the events post-Jakku, since I focus mainly on the Old Republic Era (I like seeing armies of Sith-led Imperials battle armies of Jedi-led Republicans), I am deeply interested in the universe that your FF is painting (Even if I can't tell whether it is an OC protagonist in an AU or if it is an elaboration on Canon due to my lack of knowledge, lol). Anyways, great work yet again! I might have to start taking an interest in post-Jakku SW stuff!

A truly brilliant story. It makes me sad to see that you have stopped posting updates for it. It is obvious that you intended for this story to go on much further and I would have liked to see that, including where Mirta Gev and Boba Fett come into play. Anyhow, good story, well written and good character development for Talon. Had me cheering her on the whole way and unable to stop reading... seriously, I haven't stopped reading since I started and am a few minutes away from starving to death!

noo its so good and i finally got caught up and i now have to wait for updates

awsome.

Finally got around to read this update. Wow that was surprising ending. Well Leia dyeing was a surprise but coming back Wow.

My oh my... quite the twist there.
Nice work, keep it up.

You know what I think would be cool. If Talon had been picked up by mandalorians. Any True mandalorian or mando protecter would adopt talon on the spot.