| Reviews for Ichigo's Harem |
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StarCrap chapter 4 . 12/9/2017 This is a rly good series and I hope you continue it :) |
Dee-Money chapter 4 . 12/20/2016 U have to do more girls plz |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/31/2016 Continue |
hevenlydemonknight chapter 4 . 8/23/2016 Nice |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 this was funny can't wait for Nel, Rangiku, Tia and Unohana |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 7/3/2016 this was a surprise but cool |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 7/3/2016 i laughed alot reading this chapter |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 7/2/2016 this was awesome can't wait for more |
beastyoda12 chapter 4 . 4/19/2016 Amazing |
Rob chapter 4 . 4/10/2016 You should have kept going at it |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 You you have Rukia tasky Ichigo and Orihime will guess what the next thing is maybe a foursome Ps:you are doing a good job keep up with the sstories and make sure that the next one maybe 50 shades of bleach |
Mason chapter 4 . 6/29/2015 A very good story please contuine it |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/11/2015 support review |
Crimson green flame chapter 4 . 1/14/2015 Fuck yea soi fung pregnant |
As We Fall In Love chapter 4 . 1/10/2015 Well, I read all the way through, though I have to agree with peole saying this could use work. Grammar wise and character wise, also with a bit more detail. Grammar isn't horrible, but it jumps around quite a bit. Seems rushed, like getting an apartment for all these people seemed to have come from nowhere. Ichigo kind of seems like a pimp now, even for a harem story. Descriptions of sex could be better. I mean in sure you've read sex stories before. So there's my constructive feedback. |