fam, if you came back to this? *insert mind explosion* whether you do or dont is up to you, but what you've got here is a FINE piece of work! xoxo

please update, it's brilliant

update plsssss, this is so good

Rev-view for you!
Please continue this fan fiction. It is quite addicting and has me on the edge of my seat. I honestly want to see Sunstreaker's reaction when he finds out that she has to be strong for her brother, had no friends, and will just about kill everyone or thing that injures him. He hasn't seemed to get it through his fragging thick processor that she will do anything for him. Kinda like his devotion for his brother.

Are u ever going to come back to this story? I really love this story, pleeeaaaassse update some time!

I reeeeelly like this story. Are you going to keep this uncompleted? I really hope not! Three years and waiting...

You did awesome now if only you would update this amazing story

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon

This has been an enjoyable read so far. I hope to see more eventually.

This story is really intriguing,I sincerely hope you'll continue updating.I like the approach and I like the characters.(and I also like the fact that you brought Sunstreaker in firstXD)
I definitely will be disappointed if I were to hear that you won't be continuing it.D:

CONTINUE!

You gonna update? because this is one AWESOME fanfic!

Please update soon.

please update

This is a good story so far; hope to read more of it soon and see what all happens and when she transforms for the first time too. Keep up the good work!