awesome

This is actually quite exciting! It's rare to read a story that doesn't involve the journey with Ash! Love it!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love this! I can't wait for more!

I like how this is going.

Interesting method of getting both starters; also, I like that they met up like this.

This is hilarious.

Great job on your first three chapters! :D (Chapter 2 really cracked me up! XD LOL

N is pretty intense. I like the battle but was wondering where Ivy was during the chapter. I liked the protagonists stance on liberation and Ghetsis. Keep it up.

Is the oc male or female?

I always love reading your works, however I do have a quick question: did she purposefully forget Ivy her Snivy because she said she only had one Pokemon?

Either way I look forward to your new version of this story and your other ones!

May the muses be kind,
Amni

I have Aspergers and ADHD...bit of a drama isn't it? Though Honestly i am me and i cannot imagine a me without ADHD.

Ditto on Sun & Moon...i ordered both _

I really do quite love your OC Certainly made quite an impact at the Rally didn't she?

I really like the story. It has a more realistic point than other stories, but for the life of me cannot tell what gender the main character is, or their name. Up until this point I assumed that they were male but now I don't know whether they're a boy or girl. Keep uploading, I love it

Hhh it ok won't say it good but a little below average but not horrible like other fanfics sorry to say but what your doing have already been kinda done with other fics but it not bad maybe better but who really knows.

Oh wow, I never thought this would receive new updates! I actually still read through this from time to time... even though it didn't have a ending. I just really like the main character, she's different from the norm. I find it refreshing. It's cool you want to reboot it.

I'm so, so sorry for your loss. :(

I'd go on longer, but honestly I'm a pretty socially awkward person that doesn't know what to say in these kind of situations. I wish I did, I feel sad for both you and your friend.

This is pretty good. But I'd like a copy/that pdf of the old story. I know you'd rather us stick with this one, and I will definitely read and enjoy this one, but I'd like the old story too for nostalgia purposes, please and thank you!