Awww! How adorable!

*at the end lf chapter* o(ω)o ZERED STOP BEING SO FREAKIN' KAWAII! *has cuteness overload*

1st Natsu has onyx eyes and Gray has cobalt
2nd they keep getting interupted when by they are about to kiss
3rd. I LOVED IT! (Although I have to admit, I was confused at first)

*reads authors note at before reading this chapter*
Ummm... Do ya need help with that coughing problem?
/\-/\ (This was hard to type due to typos)
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Im not sorry xD Loved the fic. Your my favorite author so keep up the great work :D Hope your days been good!

More i love this story

"his knee landing right in between the ravens leg"

Ouch! Poor gray can never ever get any babies!
Not that he would, he's gay anyway :P

Seriously, Good job! I like this fic :)
/Random stranger who thinks they're funny.

i cry happy tears. lisanna is who i ship natsu with after gray but honestly more of a friendly love than anything, kinda cute but not really the same. i just really loved her character, and to have her there to put it all together was amazing. this story really engaged me. i really liked it, it was more well written than most things I've read lately and i thank you for that. you write well and i hope you continue to do so. thank you for this. thank you so much.

yaaasss yas gray we love your gift, probably not as much as natsu but whatever c:

Gaaahhhhhh! oh my goodness its zeref! and he's adorable ~ im seriously loving this story! keep it up!

aw, i loved this chapter, and i meant to say earlier, i love how you portrayed leyon too, i like him as the younger brother. i just really like this story in general. thank you for this, keep it up. c:

I loved it 3

I like that Happy is a teacher, I've never read a fic like that before.

I'm... A littl confused. You use the terms cobalt eyes and onx eyes, but... It sound like your using onyx for Gray and cobalt for Natsu. Isn't it the other way round?

I loved this whole story 3 The feels. Once I started reading it I didn't stop until I finished. xD

Lyon is such a cockblock