Reviews for The Unbeatable
not for lack of trying chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
you haven't updated in a long time. this is a hugely great fic, please continue the story.
xxtigergirlxx chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
omg... y'd crayak do that! It's.. its so mean! poor tobias, you'd better update and make everything alright.

hey, doesn't crayak hate jake the most? shouldn't he like kill him or something? idk, just wondering i guess..

From,

xxtigergirlxx
Laur4 chapter 8 . 9/15/2004
AHH! What no more? Oh the torture...the...the...oh jeez i dunno...just...yeah...ah man...Ive been lovin this trilogy mabobber you got goin on...very interesting...very fun...very imaginative...and my spelling sucks but thats ok...just continue sometime soon mmk? No rush...no...none at all! *Whistles*
gyver21 chapter 7 . 1/12/2004
c'mon Ax! more! this was a really good story and i don't want to have to give it up!
leatharegee chapter 8 . 11/18/2003
OMG! THIS IS SO CLIMATIC (and i dont mean that in the perverted way) ITS WONDERFUL! KEEP GOING PLEASE!
Stephen chapter 8 . 9/16/2003
Wow, that was mean. You just made Tobias into some weird looking monster? But, granted, it was a nice twist. I've read the entire triology so far, and its great. Keep writing.
morph chapter 8 . 9/14/2003
Wow...it really brakes my heart the way how the Crayak is treating them. I hope everything works out ok in the end, though. Thank you so much for doing these stories! I wish that KAA would read them! Keep up the excellent work!
some one other than you chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
Ive read everything in this 'series' of yours, and I can truly say that I like it, very, very much. Though just one thing. Can you please consider giving tobais a proper battle morph? Its just that as a hawk hes so weak, while he could be a polar bear or hork bajir or andalite! Well, I hope you consider it. Please keep righting whenever you can or want to. Thanks!
John7Chris chapter 8 . 7/17/2003
Sad. That's it. Just sad. PUT THINGS RIGHT!
Moo Straberry chapter 8 . 6/15/2003
OMG! POOR TOBIAS! Sorry, over-reacted a bit there...or did I? I don't think I did actually, considering he's stuck as a freaking human/andelite/hawk! POOR TOBIAS! Sorry again...

I just re-discovered your trilogy. I reviewed a while ago, but never came back to see how you were doing on it. Awesome work! I don't want to miss the end of this one. I'm putting you on author alert!

Sorry again. I get really hyper sometimes. The second I start using ! it means I'm about to go nuts. I'll try to retain some sanity for you and your readers' sake. I might scare them off.

Well, anyway. Great story. Hurry up with the next chapter, because my entire heart just went out to Tobias. What's gunna happen next? Tell me now! I WANT TO KNOW!

There I go again. I'll be leaving now...
Gretl517 chapter 8 . 6/8/2003
Oh poor Tobias! And I'm sorry about your late reviewer friend. My only complaint is that this chapter is too short-but I'm one to talk! I haven't updated in months and I haven't even reading fanfics for months either! :-) But I liked it. Poor poor Tobias. I liked how he thought he was sounding like Rachel, that was cute and amusing. MORE! With lots and lots of R/T! :-)
CYBER HAWK chapter 8 . 6/8/2003
HI I WAS JUST BROWSING HERE AND DECIDED TO SEE IF YOU HAD UPDATED SINCE I AM NOT GETTING ANY CHAPTER UPDATES SO THAT WAS A STRANGE CHAPTER BUT I THINK IT'S GOOD IF YOU CAN GET THE ELLIMIST TO FIX HIM IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Nicole chapter 8 . 6/2/2003
Wow long time,eh?First of all I have to pay my deepest respects to Echo of the mind, may you rest in peace,bro.

Second of all it's good to see you back Missed ya!

Third- Poor as a bird,human,and alien only now you can see it did you come up with that?Very job as alway 'K.A.'
Brutal2003 chapter 8 . 6/2/2003
This is one of the better Animorph Fics that I have ever read. I hope that you update quickly.
whiteknite chapter 8 . 6/1/2003
hey got ur email! this chapter was good keep up the good work
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