Really great story. Love the way you are writing the story without going into the Stargate storyline to much.

Woo! technological advancement!

I love reading storys about developing technologys

you should really think about continuing or completing this story , it is a great story

keep it up :)

like reading a text book...

I always like a story that have some alternate group out-producing SGC in space technology. Hopefully it'll be continued soon?

Very skeletal, but a very good read never-less

when your next "chapter" comes ?

I like that you're one of the few stargate writers to have Britain as a central point in the story, and since I'm british I'm reading it for that reason :)
The reasons given for not telling the Americans do at least make sense though.
Looking forward to more!

I have to say I like how this has been progressing from the first chapter. I look forward tot he coming chapters

I like the fic. Though being an American I can't help but feel I'm being put down.

:) :)

Hi! I simply love your story and I was just wondering if youre still continuing it.

Thank you for your great work so far,
Martin

Interesting and better than the original story. Hope that you will update soon.