Reviews for What If
afsd chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
do the one with jem but as if this one hadn't happened
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
That was amazing! I haven't checked to see if you already have, but if you haven't please do a scene with Jem! Pretend this hasn't happened.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
omg more pls
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Fantastic! This is exactly how I wanted it to be lol!
Wessa chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Write it from the book like this one. You know, make two independent stories. Tessa isn't one who would sleep first with one guy and then the next.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Oooooohhh steeeeammy! I like it!
only one lover chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
nothing happened then what ever you think should happen;)
kirsten chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
oh my god this is so good i felt so aroused by it! it's good writing, especially all the ripping parts create the appropriate feel but i felt that when you wrote about tessa saying it was "new" and stuff it felt so anticlimactic- hope you write more :)
PrincessKisses101 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
have a beautiful way of writing.
squidzilla chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
oh dear this was beautifully written! It's hard to find a not rotten lemon :) thank you posting!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Do the hem one as though this happened in the book
shadowhunterlove chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
nvm i thought u were cassandra clare but amazing story
shadowhunderlove chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
OMG that is really passionate! you should have put that in the book :)
Akamarackus chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
That went fast. But cute. Can you imagine if that really happened in the books... chaos would ensue. This was great. Good job.
Amelia chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
that was great and seemed more realistic than most...
good job!
Amelia xo3
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