| Reviews for What If |
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afsd chapter 1 . 1/17/2019 do the one with jem but as if this one hadn't happened |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2016 That was amazing! I haven't checked to see if you already have, but if you haven't please do a scene with Jem! Pretend this hasn't happened. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 omg more pls |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 Fantastic! This is exactly how I wanted it to be lol! |
Wessa chapter 1 . 3/5/2016 Write it from the book like this one. You know, make two independent stories. Tessa isn't one who would sleep first with one guy and then the next. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016 Oooooohhh steeeeammy! I like it! |
only one lover chapter 1 . 1/17/2016 nothing happened then what ever you think should happen;) |
kirsten chapter 1 . 11/14/2015 oh my god this is so good i felt so aroused by it! it's good writing, especially all the ripping parts create the appropriate feel but i felt that when you wrote about tessa saying it was "new" and stuff it felt so anticlimactic- hope you write more :) |
PrincessKisses101 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015 have a beautiful way of writing. |
squidzilla chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 oh dear this was beautifully written! It's hard to find a not rotten lemon :) thank you posting! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2015 Do the hem one as though this happened in the book |
shadowhunterlove chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 nvm i thought u were cassandra clare but amazing story |
shadowhunderlove chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 OMG that is really passionate! you should have put that in the book :) |
Akamarackus chapter 1 . 3/1/2015 That went fast. But cute. Can you imagine if that really happened in the books... chaos would ensue. This was great. Good job. |
Amelia chapter 1 . 1/11/2015 that was great and seemed more realistic than most... good job! Amelia xo3 |