| Reviews for Never Alone |
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Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 21 . 3/9/2014 Awesome story! Great job, everyone was spot on. So does Sarek ever get over himself? |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/5/2012 Heads up, your summary makes it sound like they're fighting for thier lives in 2012- durin the apocalypse. False advertising aside, cool story bro! |
whennext2you chapter 21 . 6/22/2012 That was so great! I loved their relationship and it had such a happy ending ((: |
MoonstarWorld chapter 19 . 4/12/2012 Thank goodness Jim is getting better. Now he and Spock can spend time together outside of the hospital. |
MoonstarWorld chapter 14 . 4/12/2012 Thank goodness Spock and Jim found each other. I'm really enjoying this story. |
DELETES-ACCOUNT chapter 10 . 3/18/2012 that piano scene seems very familiar...twilight maybe? XD |
Karla Malfoy chapter 21 . 2/29/2012 Ohh so sweet your fic! A fic with a new theme, I had never read a fic like star trek. Very beautiful and wonderful! kisses |
RubyHair chapter 21 . 1/24/2012 Good job! |
Maranni123 chapter 20 . 1/21/2012 Why do I have a feeling that something is about to go horribly wrong? :) |
RubyHair chapter 20 . 1/21/2012 Jim's really becoming a softy! Good. I'm glad he talked Spock into going to graduation. |
Deadbuddy1 chapter 20 . 1/21/2012 AWWWWW! That was cute. I'm so glad you updated so fast. :) I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Deadbuddy1 chapter 19 . 1/20/2012 YAY! He got a new heart, and nothing went wrong! I'm so happy you updated. :) Can't wait to see how he reacts to everyone being there. The grammer seemed a lot better in this chapter. :D |
Kim chapter 19 . 1/20/2012 Yaay, Jim recovers - "In later years Jim would deny it or blame his actions on stress or medications..." yeah I saw that line hidden in the text ;) Great couple of chapters and given some people don't update for months or years at a time I think you're doing pretty good at the updating thing. |
Romanse chapter 18 . 1/18/2012 Nice chapter! Significant drop in typos and how sweet it was that Jim's friends did something to let him know that they were thinking of him! No biggy, just one tiny thing that writers commonly do: Blonde is the correct spelling for a female with yellow hair. A blond is a man. |
Romanse chapter 17 . 1/18/2012 I feared for Jim’s life. He was so close to death and very ill. I loved that Spock was there for him. Don’t forget that Spock is a teenager – a minor child. This means that he doesn’t get to manage his life the way he would if he was 20 and independent. The chapter read more like Spock is a grown man without his parental units. Amanda’s was conspicuously absent in this chapter and she would have been a great character to be there for Spock, comforting him and MAKING him go to school, just like your mom and dad would if you were in H.S. I encourage you to take your time in crafting your story. Think about the characters in the story and how they relate to one another. This will maybe aid you in telling a more complete story. I don’t mean to beat a dead horse since others have mentioned it, but BECAUSE the story is good, it deserves another mention: you need a beta. Spell check won’t help with the problems that you are having with typos because spell check can’t tell if you spelled the word correctly, but it’s the wrong word. For example, you wrote: “The oxygen mask over his face, an IV that ran into his farm…” Jim’s pigs and cows have great health care! “Jim was growing weaker by the minuet…” A minuet is a dance. Don’t think Jim’s able to do that! "It was another weak before Jim won the war." Well, yes, you did say he was getting weaker but I don’t think that’s the week you mean. Keep writing, keep thinking and take your time. This story is so worth the effort to make it the best it can be and the readers who love it WILL be patient and wait on you. |