I hope everything has gotten better for you... just wanted to thank you for this bit of entertainment. thanks...

ugh ya Chapter 4 was enough this is so disrespectful to HP

"Totally powerless without that stick" what a load of bullcrap, she could easily get out of that situation with wandless magic.

Honestly? What's with Hermione falling in love with an asshole, again? She's not 16 anymore, you know. Just because a guy is hot, doesn't mean you need to lower your stanards and put up with his crap. Good looks are fine if it's a good man on the inside, other than that...it's toxic, I have no other word for it.

With that said, the story was okay up until this point. But I never expected to read 14 chapters of Dean's bullshit. I swear he's more tolerable than this in the series. With that said, I'm so done reading about a grown man acting like a child, and a self assured, strong female mentally panting after him. She can do so much better.

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

Good !
I hope that one day, you'll continue the storyBye~

i am really enjoying your story. i hope your family crisis works out ok. i can wait for your next update but it is greatly anticipated.

I'm sorry, I hate to be that one person. I think that in writing you have talent, very few errors pop out while reading this, which is rather rare. The only thing is, although Sam and Dean along with Bobby are in character, Hermione is being bullied too easily. She's also breaking the statute of secrecy with little thought. I'm sorry for being the bad person that puts a damper on your day, I just wanted to tell you what you could've done better. Besides that, you did fanatically.

awesome story!

So I just found this story, and it seems to have been about four years since your last update. I'm not sure what happened, if you're still on fan fiction or anything, but I love this story and hope you are able to update soon. I also sincerely hope that everything is alright with your family.

Awwwww man it's been years since you last updated and this is an EPIC story! Wish you'd think about updating it.
Patiently waiting and hoping for an update

This is an awesome story. I really look forward to reading the rest. I hope your muse will get the story going for you. And that R L is good to you.

Wait... MERLIN?!

Easy boys, Hermione hates the Dark Arts as much as you do.

Continúa con el fic por favor