Great story I enjoyed it, please do more

Love it please please tell me that was so epic it just send chilled down someone's bones

This was a great story all around despite some spelling errors! The chapters including a certain mute character were quite humorous and the deaths quite descriptive, very well done! I will surely be reading this again!

The Legend has come... And He never dies!

Humans didn't attack Dragon the Gods did. Gwyn broke their Immortal Stone Scales, the Witch of Izilith burned their homes, the Archtrees, and Nito killed them with plague and diseases. Humans are the descendants of the Furtive Pygmy and the Furtive Pygmy actively kept away from the conflict and spread the Dark Soul.

This story had incredibly high amounts of potential, but around chapter 10-11, it got plain ridiculous and incredibly hard to follow, due to the sheer amounts of confusion I had. I was really enjoying this man, but it just gets way too confusing.

Now, I have read a lot of fan fiction in my life. The first quarter of this story was phenomenally good, but then... It just got really fucking confusing. I really lost all understanding of the story around chapter 11.

To those of you who are hating on this crossover, look at it this way, while yes it would've been cool to see them die in the world of dark souls, at least we have a badass character here. Focus on that not on the ponies.

I must say my friend, you have created one of the most badass dark souls characters I have ever had the pleasure of reading about. I implore you to either create more crossover fanfic with him in it or give him some of his own adventures. I am sure that Sir Lawrence of Anor Londo has yet to end his adventures.

That was an amazing story I really liked it 10/10

Wow...that was an epic story, i was worried this crossover couldn't work, but I'm glad my curiosity to see if it could lead me to reading this

This is it.

The universe can only handle so much before even it is too scarred (no, not scared you dipshit) and ashamed to go on.

You have brought us not one, but sixteen steps closer to oblivion.

No fandom is safe from the bronies.

No corner of the universe is safe.

Gwyn help us all...

Ponies? In MY DARK SOULS!? WTF has this world come to?

And yes, I hate this chapter, no, this story.

Why did you have to ruin a perfectly good game with this shit inserted?

hmm... a nice little story.

Zweihander is the type of sword, not it's name. Literally it's German for "two hander", as the sword requires two hands to use properly.