I tried to read this, I really did, but I'm just finding it to be a bit disappointing. I think the length of the chapters is awesome, and it's clear that some real effort was put into this. However I find that the yyh characters are a bit OOC in my opinion, and honestly the direction of the story and even the dialog between the charactors, at times, kind of makes me cringe. It's just not really relatable, I don't connect with the charactors as they are really presented in this story, and with the OOC factor in there for me it's kind of like I don't even really know the YYH group either. So basically I feel like I'm starting with a blank slate and there is no build up that would help me invest myself in the plot. I see real potential though, your grammar and stuff is awesome, your spelling is on par and the creative aspect of the plot is outstanding. All in all I think this is both awesome and needs work at the same time. I hope you continue to improve! Cheers!

Sorry. I clicked on the wrong fanfic by accident.

About The Wish. Metallica was a demon, not a goddess. Anyway, there was a reason this happened. in Sailor Moon. This wasn't it.

OH SNAP! Tell me what happened to Rori! TELL ME NOW! LIKE RIGHT NOW! POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!

IM DYING OF CUTENESS RIGHT NOW! YAAAAAAAAAAY!

OOOOMMMGGGG SO MUCH CUTENESS! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

Woah wait... I think I missed something. Botan's getting some action too?! Oh god, its definitely been too long since I've read this XD

Sorry for taking so long to review! Still love this story! Poor Aurora. I feelz the painz XD

nice leave off :P

Can't wait to read more!
P.S. Would you mind putting the name of the person whose POV it is? Otherwise it is a little confusing.

I invaded your page and found other things to read lol I really like this one too and can't wait to find out what happens next!

Aww that's so sweet. I really hope that Luna and her sister kick Eris's butt soon, and that Luna gets with Kurama and her sister with Hiei. Please update ASAP before my mind is destroyed from the suspense.

Well I'm just now joining this bandwagon and I really have enjoyed it so far! You have your own unique spin by adding mythology into the yyh universe and it's so fun to read. I hope you update soon!

This is really good. I'm really into this story, and its kinda funny how you put Tales of Symphonia characters in this. And I could see Hiei telling off Aphrodite because he's Hiei. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

It's not bad so far, interesting premise and I like the fact that your characters are twins. It seems kind of unique! Keep up the good work, I hope you keep writing!