Cool

Wow

this story is just too good and I love it, you should do one like this but longer if you get me? like a mating season one or something, you definitely have the skills!

Awww.. i was a bit sad because first, i thought it would be sort of a graylu pairing, but i guess, it turned out to be a nalu!

I loved this good job

I loved this story but in my head the ending would have been like this:

Natsu and Lucy went back to fairy tail and Natsu told Gray: "you and Lucy may be compatible with your magic but me and Lucy are compatible in all ways." then give Lucy a quick kiss and walk away.
And of course all the guild members looked shocked except Mira and the girls. You and I know Jason had to be there saying cool, cool, cooool getting it all on camera.

normally the lemon scenes, i would find unusual because natsu didn't really seem the cheeky and cute person he is but when you made him physically change, I REALLY found it much more interesting and not unusual at ALL. It's really good!

Urgh, stupid Gray, Stupid Jason! Poor Natsu...T_T

R u going to finish the story please

This was creative and awesome, amazing writing but I think there should be conflict like jealousy and a big twisted confession from Natsu of how much Lucy turns him on and how she plays or toys with his mind

This was super short I am hoping more in chapter four and some details are false meaning not from original fairy tail

This chapter was a little short not that suspenseful but I did like how you used more details from fairy tail than most people

This is an amazing first chapter I just wAnt to keep reading and not stop epically when it has realist details from original fairy tail

Nooooooooo, not graylu... Noooooo, nooo noooo! Yes...yeeees...more nalu (ok to wierd now, I'll just...stop...)

That was hot!