Nice story.

I enjoyed this very much! I know You wrote this years ago but I hope that you are still active and reading your reviews. You are a talented writer with an amazing ability to keep your reader guessing and continually surprised by your twists. I can't wait to continue on to read more of your stories. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all!

I'm impressed. Danny whump, a very interesting case with excellent use of Gabby, detailed original characters, action, great dialogue... You put it all together into a fast and exciting read. Very well done. Eager to read the sequel now. Poor Danny. As if this wasn't difficult enough for him. ;)

Oh no. Please dont have Gabby betraying Danny.

Smart Danny is so sexy. Add in courageous Danny and wow! Loving this story.

Awesome Fanfiction! I cant take McMahon out of my mind.. He's a damn psychotic guy. Enjoyed the whole way the story moved- Danny whump, Steve and Ohana (including Toast) finding it and the final showdown. Last chapter was sweet. Had fun reading it. :)

good story and that guy was creepy.

Yay they saved Danny!

I have managed to start at the beginning of this story a couple of days ago and just finished reading it. Awesome, wonderful, terrific job! Just loved the story and now looking very much forward to reading the sequel! Thanks for an awesome story. So sorry to read that you do not plan to write more H50 fiction. You are really very, very good at it! BTW, really enjoyed Cath's connection to Toast. I am sure you are right-that is something that would add rich depth and fun to the show.

I just came upon this story recently. Sorry I didn't review each chapter, but I just wanted to say that this was an absolutely fantastic read, full of angst, emotion, and lots of Danny whump-which I love. It was gripping and suspenseful, and I enjoyed it very much.

That was one awesome story . Thank you so much for writing and sharing it :)

i just finished reading this story. wow girl, you went to a dark place with one. creepy, but a good read. well done

Great story!

One problem though-Danny was the one who introduced Steve to Toast, so he would have recognized the voice.

Loved it. Pure and simple. Great excitement all the way through, and a sweet, warm ending. Thanks for a truly enjoyable story! Until the next one, appy Season 3!

Oh my gosh I have been so absorbed that I couldn't even fathom stopping to review. But now that they got Danny and he is fine then I felt I could stop for a moment. I love that Danny is their secret weapon and that even after all Danny has been through he knew what Steve needed and gave it to him.