So cute

Whaaat, I know, I just figured it out, omg,they don't know who Lillys dad is, but I think I do!

Fuck you. Fuck you and these feels. I'm fucking crying asshole.

I'm in love with this story! Soooo cute!

This story was amazing! Thank you for actually writing it. Your very talented at doing a good story plot. I like this. I wish I had a family like that :)

This chapter gave me feels for how Jackson is feeling! He can finally be happy.. And all just Amazon how things can work out.

Stiles is lilly's dad, you dont have to tell me. I just know it, I just know it in here (points to my heart) no here (points to stomach) yeah my in my gut. (I watch too much T.V.) lol I really like your story, I dont know who told you to stop writing for lent. But they were wrong, what did they mean by for lent. Is that like a new site thing, or is it the with stuff that gets on your clothes? If the latter then who does one 'stop writing for lent?' Okay this is becoming longer than I wanted it to be at first.

That first scene broke my heart in the best and worst ways. :'c

Okay I know this story is old but I really wanted to review it anyways. One I loooooved it!... Well most of it. I HATED how you made Danny's character and I hated how much of a push over you made Stiles. Like if That happened to me I would have kicked Danny's and Jackson's asses and then would make Jackson beg for me to forgive him. And then the threesome.. I hate those. Granted I can't control what happens in the story but still...soo like it was great until the last like 5 chapters. I commend you on a great job even if I didn't like everything cuz I know it's hard to please everybody. Good luck in any further stories you decide to write! :)

Stiles has no shame, love it

So Stiles is friends with Derek and his family and also coaches at the pool? I want to make sure I have that right. I like it so far.

Yeah, that threw me for a loop, Derek and Allison but I understand your explanation, Allison is more nurturing, plus, the story is about Jackson and Stiles, so really, it doesn't matter who Derek is with.

YOU'RE A STORY WRITING, PLOTTING, MEGAMIND GENIUS!

I LOVED IT!

That was such an awesome story, it was NEVER boring and it just kept me entertained throughout the whole thing. You, my friend, are a GENIUS!

my favorite teen wolf couple! Sorry for the cutoff I accidentally pushed a button! And I loved this whole story from start to finished, I thought it was adorable and sexy and cute :)

You've just combined my favorite things: hot guys and male Olympic swimmers! Is it horrible though that instead of imagining Colton Haynes as Jackson I was totally seeing him a Ryan Lochte? :D Well a smarter version of him! I loved this whole story cause I think Jackson am Stiles have become my favorite teen w