I liked this. I like the angsty fics but it's nice to read something lighthearted and fun

I have a new favourite song. It's called: awake and alive by skillet. Btw awesome story! :D

Great one-shot.

very funny. awake and alive is one of my favorite songs. i love skillet although i like the song the last night better than awake and alive.

Love it!

Not bad. :)

loved it

YEEEESSSS! Skillet! But omgs that song is so ironic! Anywho, I liked :D

Squeeee!

Awesome short story and idea! :)
imagining Danny singing makes me smile! :3

CUTE! I love bonding fics between Phantom and the Fenton parents

OMG I LOVE SKILLET! And Three Days Grace

Awwwww
That was so cute!
So beautifully written!
So marvelous!
So wonderful!
I know I'm exaggerating this...but it's really great you should try a sequel for this.

HalfafanD:

Nice story. I truly enjoyed the banter between Danny Phantom and his parents. It was very entertaining.

With that said, I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism because that is one of the reasons why I review. I especially appreciate a story more when it is well-written. So, I think this story needed a bit more editing. One thing that has helped me when I proof-read is to read what I wrote back out loud. Really. And I'm talking about truly out loud and not just mentally re-reading it. That has helped me catch a lot of my errors. I'm not perfect, of course, but I do try to post only the most polished pieces! And I'm very willing to correct mistakes if a reader kindly points it out to me.

Also, I don't think it's necessary for you to insert your personal comments in the middle of the story. It kind of brings me back to reality when I want to be caught up in the fantasy.

Overall, however, I did enjoy this little interlude with Danny Phantom and his parents!

truephan

cool one-shot :)