Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it!

And another thing b4 I go you've balanced them out with the playfulness and seriousness and one of my fav parts in this is when yoruichi was going to cut herself and not soi like the was very powerful just that whole part with soi testing her like ugh I hate you because I love this fic so much omg! You've ruined my life cries out loud

I love this fic omg omg omg I just love them ugh love how you've capture yoruichi personality in this it's like somewhat the same in the anime especially soifon spot on lol

wow
such an intense story
i really love it
the depth of SoiFong is perfect, and the serious Yoruichi with the episode of herself rather slicing her own neck was so powerfull...
really, thank you, i know i will read it again soon
:o)

This is probably the best Yorusoi fic I've ever read. I like how there was a balance of joking moments and serious moments throughout the whole story, and I also like how you didn't have too much dialogue or too much imagery. I sometimes teared up at some parts because they brought back some memories for me...it's the whole reason I ship these two, haha. Thanks for the great story, and keep up the amazing work!

finaly finished the mian story now just need to read the omaka

i enjoyed it

over all i give it a 8.5/10 only real complain was a bit angsty for my taste but over all verry cute and enjoyable

i ilked yoruchi;s standign up for soi fona d her srealtion ship and all that

but i have to say u made matsumoto abit sluty yes she is a party girl but that dont mean she is a slut

sry for late review i get distracted easy as ive said good so far but end was a bit dark any ways ill get the next chapter read soon (as in in about 30 min id say)

Holy shit! It's fuckin' awesome!

I beg you please create the sequel..! Your writing styles just awesome in my opinion.. And very sweet for yorusoi pairing.. Uggh I love them..

It's just weird why only a few reviewer for this lovely story.. Ugh hope they will read this soon..

perfect story i loved it is their goin to be a sequal

There are a few nagging points in an otherwise fine story.

1- I was interested in the alternate interpretation of Omaeda you established, where he was (unless i read this totally wrong) trying to make some sort of romantic overtures towards Soi Fon, but Soi does generally have more respect for him than portrayed here (if not by all that much)

2- Their separation was for a period of 100 years, a single century, not multiple

3- Soi Fon was in no way at fault for not being able to go with Yoruichi, Yoruichi simply didn't want to take away her future career by making her into an outlaw. The lesson you were trying to impart was a good one (that Soi Fon needs to stop seeing Yoruichi as such an inaccessibly superior woman), but the reasoning was ill-founded

Otherwise i quite enjoyed it, don't get me wrong. It tells a story with a more hateful Soi and how that hate is overcome, and I, like you, like Soi Fon to be a teetotaler (no alcohol).

enjoying this so far but id like to point out soi-fon does have some respect for oomeada he did earn his rank of vice captain after all (even if he is a bafoon)

granted she woudl never admit it out loud

Very well done :) It'd be cool to see another story from you here. The YoruSoi fandom seems to be suffering.

Not many words I can type here to express how wonderful this story is xD

I read chapter 1-8 nonstop and loved it every sentence of it!

Your writing is beautiful. I can't wait to read more from you!

This was pure brilliance! I loved every chapter ad the amount of detail you were able to capture using Soi's view point! And I must thank you so much for the Omake chapter, I would have been shouting for more if you hadn't.

To sum up, I love this, well done!