Nice job

hi,I'm sorry,make more,better?

UPDATE PLEASE

First chapters nice cnt wait to see where the story is headed...hurry and update

Well, what do you know? Finally I'm here with my review! :) So Eve/Punk, huh? Never actually read this couple until now - first time for everything, though. What the heck is Punk's deal? It's one thing to be a loner, but another to be a smart-ass loner. I'm surprised Johnny Ace didn't take more action and be stern with him of his truancy - then again, even if he did, it would go in one ear and out the other. So I'm wondering how long it will be until it's finally revealed why he acts the way he does. It won't be long before he lets those walls down for someone to be in his life, namely Eve. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter, update soon. :)

continue please...

I really like Punk & Eve this would be an amazing story:D

Nice job! So are we going to see mixed blessings soon?

Finally! Finally I get to this and finally you're back! I've missed your writing and I am super, duper glad to have you back where you belong. Thank you for giving it another shot, Christal.

I'm really happy you used this pairing - I know I forgot to mention it to you in all my crazy list, so yeah... Love these two. They're remarkable together. :)

First chapter and I'm already enticed? You betcha! What is Punk's deal? Like, I get he's not the most sociable person 'cause I'm not either, but it's like he purposely isolates himself and I don't comprehend why.

Christal, you have to update this asap! I need to know what's gonna happen and why Punk is being the way that he is. I am officially hooked. This is going on faves and alerts right now.

It's great to have you back on this train ride.

~Alisha~

I saw you send this link to Mikki on Twitter, so I just HAD to check it out! :) Punk and Eve are definitely starting to grow on me. :)

Kelly does seem like the type to take forever, I mean have you SEEN how much make-up that girl wears? haha. But that was good thinking to take Eve's phone, though I would have knocked down the door to get it!

Oh my Punk. I love him so much. And the 'Lone Ranger' name does seem to fit him rather well.

I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS GOESSSS! :D

x C. :)

Really cool start! I like what you've done with this so far and I can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the awesome work!

Update soon enjoyed it thus far. Made me laugh about the pepsi machine. I can imagine Kelly to be like that. Keep up the good work

Update soon enjoyed it thus far. Made me laugh about the pepsi machine. I can imagine Kelly to be like that. Keep up the good work

Good 1st chapt here. Hope to hear more from the story soon! :)

*story alerts this story*

I totally can see Eve and Punk together. He might be a loner, but he's always joking with her on Twitter, calling her Steve, and she calls him Phyllis. He went skydiving with her for Tribute To The Troops. And we all know that friends fall in love all the time...