Reviews for Phobias
JustLikeAir chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
FYI, I also hate onions and will make any excuse to no use them, so lets gang up and revolt against onions Misaki!
Person chapter 5 . 9/4/2013
My teacher last year was reading from a book of phobia's and It mentioned arachibutyrophobia! And the phobia of long words is very very long word.
orihimu chapter 15 . 8/11/2013
phobophobia? …This story was really enjoyable to read, I liked learning new words, heh…
My sister used to be scared of clowns when we were little because our dad made us watch Batman and the Joker scared her half to death. …FUNFACT! The fear of long words is a long word:hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia
orihimu chapter 14 . 8/11/2013
Poor Hotaru, I'm just thinking when the boys were like 'Just a pen holder I was like' 'hn, I would like to see you do better.'
orihimu chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
OMG, I have hemophobia! The mere sight of blood makes my insides churn.
orihimu chapter 12 . 8/11/2013
AHA, it's august 2013 and we're still alive! But, I really am scared to think what will happen tomorrow? A fire could start, a murderer, burglar, earthquake, tornado, anything could happen to end your life. We really have to live life to our fullest, because life is so short.
Don't mind my dramatic moment, i'm just like that… –.–;
orihimu chapter 11 . 8/11/2013
O.O, inspired by your real life? … I never liked Jin-Jin…
orihimu chapter 10 . 8/11/2013
I haven't got in a relationship, but I think single is best. I mean, who wants a boyfriend? Okay, I know tons of girls would be screaming YEEEEESSSS, but you'll either break up or get married in the end. And I don't think you would find your soul mate so easily. So, what's the point? Well, there goes that saying It's better to have loved and then lost to have never loved at all.
orihimu chapter 9 . 8/11/2013
This is also a bit on the sad side…After a point of thinking Hotaru was my favorite character, I realized all the bad things in her: She has no right to hit Mikan every day with no good purpose and be rude to her, and all of a sudden she gets emotional when Mikan is leaving! It's horrible. But this chapter really made me think, is she really that horrible?
orihimu chapter 8 . 8/11/2013
aww, I've never seen Persona in this light before. This is very creative to put how Persona was feeling this whole time. Who is the girl corpse in the bed? I can't remember who it might be…
orihimu chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
-Trying to hold in laughter- pfft…
T-the fear…of peanut butter…sticking to the roof of your mouth…?
HAHAHA
Annabelle Rae chapter 15 . 5/12/2012
And because it's awesome, I shall review again.

Seriously, I love how you were able to depict all their emotions effectively. I love how they, okay, well some, were able to overcome their fears.

I think of you as a great writer. Enough said. Because you know, if someone else were to make this story, it would not be half as good as this.

You were able to link their phobias into things, into other people, or with themselves, that made this collection so believable. You were able to stay in character, and you portrayed their emotions effectively.

I also loved how you paid attention to minor characters. They are just not given enough attention.

I loved everything in this collection, no joke. They were all unique and special in their own way. They just cannot be compared to one another.

Once again, I am amazed.

With much regards,

Athena :)
Annabelle Rae chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
Hi Riyaaaa! ;)

So I was reading all of these drabbles? One-shots? Yeah, that. And I just want to point out one mistake here on this chapter.

This here:

She thought for a while, "Okay," she finally said, "I've got nothing to loose."

It should be "lose" instead of "loose".

Other than that, this collection of drabbles/one-shots (cause I don't know. Yay me. :))), never fails to amaze me. I've said it before. This is completely unique and original. I really love this, I swear.

And thanks for your review to So Close. I was not able to include my thanks in my PM, was I? So thank you, really. If I am a great writer, you're just better. ;) I don't think that a drabble about phobias would cross my mind ever.

Hats off, Riya. You really, really have potential. :)

And so I put the ever-so-famous err, tag line(?), of mine. ))

With much regards,

Athena :)
KidTantei chapter 15 . 4/24/2012
This was a beautiful collection that was so good to read and I can't believe it took me so long to review OTL. Natsume's feelings felt so real. You write very well (:
Meteor Light chapter 15 . 4/9/2012
Fear of fear is a rocker... Once again, loved it heeh!
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