where is the 10th chapter
you sead thers 2 more

Pls keep up writing I love this story :D

I love your story ! and the new chapter is amazing as usual;))) you are a great writer ! I look forward to a new chapter soon please? the following by pity ! it's so great!

I love this story! it is very well written and the pacing is appropriate. I love that Severus is inexperienced, he's so sweet! it's refreshing to read vs the manwhore he's sometimes portrayed as in some stories. I look forward to the next chapter, well done!

This is really good! There's hardly any errors - whether it be spelling, grammar, or punctuation - which can sometimes be quite obvious to the naked eye. You've got your sentence formatting right for the most part, and your spelling is brilliant! Well, apart from a couple of words, but that may just be because I'm Australian and they have different spellings in different places. Anyways, I'd like you to know that I really like this story and would appreciate it a lot if you could update soon with another chapter! If you're not able to, I understand, but please, don't abandon this story, and if you do, at least put up a notice. Though I feel like you won't. Your characters are hardly OC, though sometimes in small parts they are, a little, but I know that it can be really hard to captivate a character right for some parts of a story and you just can't do it without making them a little out of character. Please, update! I'd really appreciate it!
~Aegis12.

I do want to add, that I understand you are incredibly busy, I do not want to make you feel pressured to write, just to inform you I love what you are doing, and will patiently wait for the next installment to your works.

I need you to finish this. I know you have a life out there somewhere in the real world, but this world you created is very special and Harry and Severus' story needs to be told. It is perfectly brilliant and beautiful. I love the characterization you've done for everyone. I also really want to read about what really went on with Draco and his motives. He seemed upset by his father's letter, even though it seems like he ought to have known there'd be consequences to whatever he had told him. I think Harry should be able to accept his own feelings soon, and I'm excited for him to admit it, not only to himself, but hopefully Severus. Thank you for writing this story, I am going to follow it, and hope to read more for it soon.

Hi! I love love loved your story! It had me on the balls of my feet for it's entirety... And I can't wait for you to update next!
Your grasp of the characters and their personalities is marvelous and their portrayal was very well done.
Harry and Sev's kiss was super cute!
Please update soon! Please please, pretty please, with Sev on top? ;)

Love it so far and seriously hope u will start updating it again soon

I'm really enjoying your story! I really like this sweet loving comforting feeling between Harry and Severus, I just hope Harry realizes soon that he DOES have those feelings for Severus before he ends up hurting the poor man accidentally! I can't wait to see how everyone reacts when it comes out that Severus was under that particular curse, and what it means that he isn't any longer. I especially can't wait to see people's reaction when they find out that HARRY is the one that broke it! LOL!

I wonder EXACTLY what memories Draco saw in the Pensieve... and what on earth possessed him to turn poor Severus in like that! I was also wondering about Severus' Dark Mark - is there any way to bind him to Harry instead of Voldie? Like, for Harry to take over the mark somehow?

You're doing a really great job! Can't wait to see where you go with it next! :-)

Love this!

Just wondering if you were still working/planning on updating this! I keep coming back to it! Thanks!

Yay you updated! I love your stories so much, thank you for giving us a new chapter! This made my day :)

Hmmm, we'll my favorite scene is where Sev and Harry really talk. The culmination of everything with the redo on Sev's first kiss was touching and so emotional. Very well written. I am glad that you're back to this one and it's nice that Hermione and Luna have picked up on Harry's feelings, though he hasn't figured them out fully himself. The support of his friends will help him realize and come to terms with them, I believe. TLC

Nice and sweet but very slow moving.