I cannot begin to tell you how beautiful this was! I loved it!

Heh had found and read this on your livejourney at first and posted a comment there, but then found you here and figured I might as well put the comment here as well. So here goes:
I'm so done with this.. it was so THEM! I loved how you portrayed them, the universe and situation so true to the original. It felt real so to say, and I'm impressed by your make-them-stay-in-character-skills. (it's something I seek in fanfics so this was a real joy to read)
And it was so sweet and heart warming to see them interact like that. (but also sad and very heart breaking to read about a highly concerned, guilt tripping Ed and a broken, skinny, crying Al, thank you very much for that! *sobs because feels*)
This is so nicely written too, and I can't even find words enough right now to describe how much I loved it. It was simply amazing and made my whole day.

So sweet! 3

The sheer brotherly love coming out of this wonderfully written piece would bring a smile to anyone's face. You pegged Ed and Alphonse's personalities and relationship perfectly. Which just makes it all that more impressive to me, because I've tried to get Al's tone of voice right, and it's IMPOSSIBLE. (Seriously, how do you create a script for somone who's both a ten-year-old and a sixteen-year old teenager?) You also tied up a lot of loose ends concerning the series. You did a fantastic job! :D

:)

Brilliant story. I feel like you've captured the way the characters behave on their own and with each other amazingly well. This was a great insight into some just plain old brotherly love, something that can be difficult to find so well written I find.

I like this. A lot. Very sweet and brotherly :) xoxo

awww! love this story!
if it's a two-shot though, you may want to switch the status to complete .

This story is totally awesome. I love how you wrote Al and Ed. It just made me squee so much. Great story. _

Please excuse me while I go find a dictionary, for there are simply not enough words in my vocabulary to express just how much I love this story...

I will now type randumbly in lieu of proper praise:

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(now that I have that put of my system)

Thank you! I sincerely want to thank you for writing this! I really can't tell you how much I love this even if I tried so I'm not even going to try! Although it does sound like I'm trying-I mean-I..just... LOVE. That's all I can say. "Love". Peeple toss that word around a lot but I can honestly say, "I LOVE THIS STORY."

(giddly laughing at how stupid I feel for being at a loss for words)

I just...really can't wait for an update. Maybe by then I'll be able to leave you with a proper review. This story deserves one.

-And I think I've seen the picture you mentioned over on DeviantArt. I like that site! I have my own account over there but I haven't logged on in a great while... (laughs)

I'm too lazy to sign in right now, but whenever I do sign in, I am adding this wonderfull story of yours to my "favorites" and to my "story allerts". ..and then I will print the whole thing out and put it in a lovely folder as so I can read it whenever I like. I hug it and name it "George" and cuddle with it at night and-ok, maybe I won't do THAT. But if this story continues to get better,... I might be temped.

Wait, that's the ending...Aww, man, I was hoping for more! This is too good!

This was SOOOOO cute. Oh my god. I adore the closeness of these two, and you illuminated it so well with this gorgeous style of yours. Thanks so much for sharing.

Awww no, is that the end, end? I want to read more!

Your writing is awesome and it sounds like this is actually part of the anime that happened :)

I love it all. Very family-y and brotherly. :)

I really love this. Well-written, in-character, and a nice way of showing brotherly love at its finest. Great job!

Keep writing!

Inuchron