Really like your writing

Please continue! :.(

So I'm guessing you quit...maybe you should reconsider and write more ips fic..

this has serious potential..hope you find a way to continue..

Omg. U should def continue this! I'm already hooked!

plz keep writing

Please tell me he fights for her!

I think it's great, the way Mary openened up to Marshall, even harshly, but she put herself in a vulnerable position... Marshall now knows what she feels... we know how he feels... so... maybe you can do something with that! I'd love to read what's gonna happen newt! PLease write more? Thank you

Aw that was so sad :(

But very good :) please update soon!

I don't know why, but I love Mary leaves stories and this one looks like it could be terrific.

That last line is heartbreaking!

Looking forward to more.

Very intriguing! Can't wait to read more!