This is really lovely - the dynamic between Ayu & Morita is beautiful and really vibrant - even though we know we're heading for bitter sweetness.

_ nice story!

I believe this work deserves more credit. Not only did you paint a highly plausible back-story, you captured the very feeling Honey and Clover conveyed. A tad bit magical, right dash of sweetness and very dose of almosts and bittersweet reveries. Impression: lingering, impressive.

Oh this was simply gorgeous! This was what I believed could have happened before H&C began. I too sensed that Morita & Yamada had some prior history and a connection that was never fully explored. I've always liked the brief moments they had together and was sad they never got together officially.
Thanks for this elegant piece; bittersweet as it is! Perhaps a happier sequel is in order...? (wink)

Thank you for writing this and thank you for letting me beta-read it! It was a delight to read every word. I've never been very sympathetic of Morita, but you've made me a fan with your expert handling of his character. This one is definitely going into my favorites ;)

This is so beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

This was heartbreaking, I absolutely loved it! H&C is realy one of my favourite anime, I don't see why its not as popular as others...anyway, great work, keep it up. :)