| Reviews for Parlor Tricks |
|---|
   Warpwind chapter 33 . 10/27/2019 this is still alive? nice! |
| ByLanternLight chapter 33 . 10/25/2019 Thanks for writing! |
| essex2 chapter 33 . 10/25/2019 Nice chapter, and looking forward to seeing how their trip to town goes. |
| Warpwind chapter 32 . 4/2/2019 noice! impatiently awaiting the continuation if possible. |
| essex2 chapter 32 . 8/5/2018 Nice ficlet. I wouldn't mind more shorts like this as long as they stay an irregular occurrence. |
| essex2 chapter 31 . 8/3/2018 Was checking out old fics I liked and noticed this one had updated. Nice job explaining what Rabbit had been doing while the story was centered on Louise. |
| Mingyu chapter 31 . 7/18/2018 Ahaha! Tabitha is calling him out! Also, Nimble Rabbit didn't seem to get quotation marks... Thanks for the chapter! |
| Akuma-Heika chapter 22 . 7/12/2018 "...let alone a single MILLENNIUM." Since you said earlier in the sentence it could be more than one century. I am not that surprised that Rabbit doesn't know about Yellow, Iridescent, or Black Jade. |
| AdventureousFox19 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 ugu |
| Akuma-Heika chapter 17 . 7/11/2018 Need a better host site for your image. I am on fiber optic, and yet the pic never loads. Site does, but the image does not. Is it the normal gandalfr mark or is it different? |
| Eli Clark chapter 30 . 6/10/2018 This story was really good. I love Nimble Rabbit. Can't get to any art though. |
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/6/2018 Wow! It's good to see this is alive! I feel like the last time I checked up on this fic was years ago and I assumed it dead then, but its really a pleasant surprise to see that you're carrying on! Loved the new chapter! |
| A job well done chapter 30 . 12/14/2017 Good job, this is one of the few FoZ fanfics that doesn't complete demonize the nobles. I found your take on Louise to be refreshing compared to her generally one dimensional portrayals in other fan fictions. I didn't see any glaring issues, though I saw 'your' where it should have been 'you're' in some spots. I will admit that I don't know too much about Exalted, so I can't judge how closely your character fits in with that world. I also liked how you avoided the standard Guiche fight, where the main character shows off their abilities and curbstomps Guiche. Your main character seems reasonably powerful for the story. I've noticed that most authors love inserting overpowered characters so they can lord over canon characters. I don't have too much to say, but I am interested in seeing how the plot will diverge from canon. Keep up the good work. |
| essex2 chapter 30 . 11/29/2017 Glad to see this story updating. It'll be interesting to see what happens next with Osmond. |
| Biigoh chapter 30 . 11/28/2017 It's still alive? :3 |
