Reviews for The Voidsong |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I love this story! Everyone is brilliantly in character, and the story if awesomely believable (for a SuperWhoLock universe, of course, lol X3)! The way the met up, with the multi-verse in peril and all, was just great. Especially their reactions to everything! XD (I'd also like to say that the mini story arc you did with Jack the Ripper was absolutely amazing! I mean, the Doyle of Sherlock's universe having a double personality who was the real murderer was just- pwwoooosssh! Mind blown! Your creativity knows no bounds, seriously. Who would expect Google of all companies to start creating arenas for sentient beings to fight in? Brilliant job on that story arc as well! :D) I'd really like to see the end of this. So, I hope you can update it soon, even if it has been over a year this time around. -Shadows |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo, your so clever! I love this story! It's so very cute and absolutely fun! I can truly imagine all of them interacting together in a believable story! :D I very much look forward to your next chapter and I hope you have a lovely day! :DD ~Neeky-chan |
![]() ![]() This is incredibly well done, usually when a fic with such a large cast is written, it'll be too jumbled and confusing. But I think you got it exactly right! None of the characters are forgotten about, it's clear why everyone is there (ergo they're not just there because). MARVELOUS! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() I love you...don't find many good crossovers, but this one is extremely enjoyable. Loved seeing Bobby and Gabriel, I've been missing them both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh please update this, I'm dying to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loooove superwholock crossovers. Pleeeeeease finish the story. |
![]() ![]() Such a fun story keep up the great work. More than the other characters i think youve absoultely nailed the doctor, dean, and same. Cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() amazing story keep going. Excellent righting and your take on the characters is suberb. |
![]() ![]() When you publish the last chapter will you publish the other three you had in mind? It would be so cool if you did! UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() Here's some characters I think would be good to appear; River Song and Charlie Bradbury because she totally fits into SuperWhoLock and would be cool for her to meet John and Sherlock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After Earth's Mightiest Heroes, this is the next best thing. Can't wait for the next chapter, I just really can't. |
![]() ![]() I think 10 chapters chapters should be like; episodes and you've done 6 so maybe you could go for 4 more. The interludes are like deleted scenes connected to one of the chapters. You could make one chapter about how they landed in the universe of zombies, the other two about anything you want and last one about how they finally defeat the Voidsong and restore order to their universes. What do you think? |
![]() ![]() ![]() From the end of the Four Score and Seven Vampire Hunters chapter I got the impression that you were going to have River show up, I was quite looking forward to that actually... Haha anyways I really love your story so far! It is extremely well written and the plot and characters are completely believable. I can't wait to read more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, that was absolutely thrilling! I have never seen such an action-packed, detailed and in-character fic before. The prose and language used was beautiful but not too flowery, and your characters were so real that I could hear them saying the dialogue in my mind. Your plot is compelling and complex but easy to follow, and I love how everything weaves together. The one thing I could suggest is to include Sam and Rory more; I feel like sometimes they got overshadowed. Other than that I have absolutely no complaints! :) |